All Comments on 'Love Mother, Love Daughter'

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frappdudefrappdudealmost 15 years ago
Excellent!

Great read... what a seductive little minx... Well told tale. Look forward to more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great Story

And I liked Marks' character as well. While he shouldn't have cheated on his fiancee, at least he broke it off with her before they got married. Of course, he should have kept fucking Ashley, maybe knock he bitch ass up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
wonderful daughter

another wonderful daughter on her way to pigville.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
wonderful daughter

another wonderful daughter on her way to pigville.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
wonderful daughter

another wonderful daughter on her way to pigville.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
wonderful daughter

another wonderful daughter on her way to pigville.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
wonderful daughter

another wonderful daughter on her way to pigville.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
wonderful daughter

another wonderful daughter on her way to pigville.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
wonderful daughter

another wonderful daughter on her way to pigville.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
wonderful daughter

another wonderful daughter on her way to pigville.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
TWO--WHY--ONE

The old saying is two hens in the hen house and one rooster--a big fight in the hen house--OVER THE ROOSTER

marklionmarklionalmost 15 years ago
Fabulous Story!!!!

That was a fabulous story that you wrote about Ashley seducing her mother's finance a/boyfriend Mark. I love how she did in the laundry room and then in the bedroom with the dress. I love how you described the way the Mark took her in the bedroom after trying and the wedding dress. I think he should have stayed with her mother and had fun with both of them after the wedding. I don't think he had the guts to really be able to take care of two women at the same time. That would have been a challenge for him by taking care of both Ashley and her mother at the same time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Loved it!

Enjoyed it so much. Enough background and suspense to keep the reader going and wanting more. Enjoyed the ending too with Mark leaving Ashley's mother. More realistic to me than him staying and having them both. And the very last scene had me going so much. The imagery was perfect. Nicely done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Oh my life!

That was amazing - I haven't come so hard in ages! thank you!

Firmhands5Firmhands5over 13 years ago
hot

Talk about cumming! That last scene on her mother's bed and the thumping! WOW!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

please write more stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
fuck together

nice story, mark could have fucked both together, look forward to that

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
shouldn't it be in reluctance?

great story, but isn't it more about the reluctance than the age difference? I'm glad i found it in spite of the placement.

chocolatemanchocolatemanalmost 9 years ago
wow..well written. Such good perspective

I've got to say, never has a story gotten me so hot in just the detail of the anticipation.

At the end of each 'chapter' i couldnt help but release myself to it. By the end of the entire 6 pages over the course of a few days, I released 4 times. Unbelievable

Well written.

thefuckiamthefuckiamalmost 7 years ago
A sequel?

If it's possible, then please please continue the story of Ashley and Mark!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

What a horrid bitch. Poor Mother. yuck.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great

This story was a little long in parts but extremely well written! Very talented!

Radical11Radical11over 2 years ago
Nice !

Such a beautiful little slut !

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