by monochromaniac
I've been checking everyday for an update for this story. I love Adult spins on Fairy Tales. I can't wait to read where you take these characters. This is definitely not Disneys Beauty and the Beast, no matter what comments people leave. You continue with this refreshing take on this beloved childrens tale.
This story is off to a great start. I cant wait to see were you take this.
I was sad, that you didnt get to post chapter 3 for a while--i was actually worried for a while, that you may have just stoppd writing. WHATEVER YOU DO, DONT STOP WRITING THIS STORY! lol. I love it! I do love the new twist---did i mention that i love it? lol
I cant wait for the next chapter(s). please dont keep us waiting too long. Im just dieing to know what he is holding back--i wonder what his secrets are!
PLEASWE MORE!!!
I actually was checking yesterday if you posted another chapter and somehow I mised this chapter!!!!! Yea I know, i'm wondering how the hell that happened too! haha
But I LOVE it! hehehe Oh I can't wait for the next chapter!! :)
Please post soon!
I'm sorry, I don't like that she has to submit to him. Nobody with any pride would take that sort of treatment. Even if she can't fight back, she doesn't have to accept it so willingly.
However, I do think it was well written, and except for my previous comment, it's a good storyline.
Very nice. I really like this story but why did you stop? I was really enjoying it. MORE PLEASEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I hope you can find the time and energy to finish this story. I really enjoyed it!
I don't dislike this story, but I do feel it is indeed lacking something.
I do, however, look forward to the next chapter.
This has the makings of a good story. Instead it has been relegated to the ranks of the unfinished here on literotica. This is a sad and depressing date for one with such promise but alas, it is a common one.