by robcub32
One of your best. It had everything your could ask for in a romance. I hope you plan to post more soon.
Every time I read your stories I cry! I LOVE THEM!!! Im also green with envy of all the lovers in your stories. Im a woman and I WISH i could find love like that! GREAT WORK!!!
Your writing has always been good, but it keeps getting better and better! This is definitely one of my favorites. I hope you continue writing as it always makes my morning to open up this site and find a new story from you!
I look for a new story from you every time I open up on the site. This one had me both laughing and crying in joy. I love it from the begining to the end.
Keep writing and don't ever stop.
Ashe'
I have read and liked an number of your stories. Let's be honest, most people reading these stories are just looking to "get off". So, it's not all that often you get a really good story that's good and very well written, as well as very hot and erotic. And though i read a lot of different stories, I rarely get taken in by the longer ones like yours. So, big props for the very good writing.
PS- It doesn't hurt, that I've had similar romantic fantasies, as the plot of you story.
I have read all of your stories and check for updates whenever I log in. You create really sexy, romantic characters and I can't wait to see what you dish up next!
What a nice surprise after having a crap day at work to come home and find another one of your stories. I've been reading your stories from the start and each one gets better. I like that they are getting longer and are so well written. Keep up the good work but don't keep us waiting so long for the next story
oh my goodness, the comment made about Ben being the one to scream while Benji is being "plugged" just about got the better of me. the flashes of crazy humor makes your stories so great and starts my day off with a smile.
I LOVE AND APPRECIATE YOUR WORK!!! Your stories are so loving, the only part that makes me sad is that some of your characters go thru such horrific abuse before they find a love of their own. I can only hope that in real life it is not so bad, but I think your written work speaks the truth and my heart aches because of it. You are a wonderful story teller and you feel the sadness and the loneliness and ultimately the love of your characters. Did I say I love your work?! I LOVE IT!!! THANK YOU!!!
What can i say but WOW!!! Love Your storys!!! and i agree with the last comment!!!
I really love this story, but I don't really like Ben. He comes off as a jerk, and I feel like he's too aggressive and too obsessed with being the dominant male.
I always look for your name when I get on because I know that your stories are the best! Cant wait for the next one :)
I agree with all the comments, when I see a new story with your name on it I get so giddy! I think you're a wonderful writer and I've fallen in love with all of your stories. I thought Ben and Benji were just the sweetest couple and I love that they found one another. I also loved Brandon and Toby, all four of them were such endearing characters. Anyway, I can’t wait for more from you, this one was another great story!
I too had my doubts about Ben but once again I was drawn in by your writing and fell in love with the Ben/Benji love story.
in every story of urs i fall in love with the characters every time and i never want the story to end keep up the good work
Great story and I loved the wonderful supporting role played Toby- that really made me smile.
I loved your story. The description of Ben reminded me of the description of Edward in Jane Eyre.
I adore this story, I've read it so many times I've lost count and it still makes me smile. Please keep posting your stories, they're fatastic. They make me smile, laugh and cry...and they're also incredibly Hot!!!!! Thank you, they're the perfect pick me up!
You are an awesome writer I check for a new story from you daily I hope you write more I love them all and have read them countless timess but this has to be one of my favs please please write more stories like this the sweetness just draws me in !!!
I loved this story. I think I smiled through more than half of it. It was very sweet and you did a wonderful job.^_^
This story made me smile laugh and cry from begining to end. great story line and plot. wonderful attention to detail. I liked how ben was a knight in shinning armor and how he protected benji no matter what. i like how things worked out for both of them in the end as well and that they moved in together. will this be the end of the story or are there more chapters showing benji moving in and possibly he and ben might want to tie the knot with each other with wedding bells?
all in all a great story and i look forward to the next one written by you. keep writing.
here i am sitting up later allmost 2 am alberta canada time i am very happy for ya both and very well said storie and hoping there is more to this storie after me reading
This was an excellent story, even though Benji is a bit of a wimp. It would have been nice to have found out why Boothe got sacked. Fingers in the cash-till perhaps? I think the responsibility of his new job and the enhancement of his self-worth by Ben's love will strengthen Benji's character.
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I loved the scene where Benji was introduced to steak!
it made not just get hard but it made me feel good I'm glad I clicked on your story.
Do you or have you ever had a partner in the marines or uncut? Are they big and you small since all of your stories are written from the smaller man's point of view. Have they had pick-ups and older brothers that absolutely love the smaller guy?
I am very happy that I clicked on your story. I had planed to read for only a few minutes but I just couldn't stop reading. Your characters were very well developed and the writing was awesome. You have some serious talent. I loved the entire story. I actually like how you kept the reason for booth getting fired a secret it gave the stroy an extra kick and I loved Benji. All in all it was one of the best short stories I have ever read online. Fucking wonderful job!
I am a huge fan of your work. I have read all of your stories. And this is my second time reading Big Ben. Do you have any new stories in the pipeline. I am anxiously awaiting something new!!!!!
i don't usually read stories this long but with this 1 i couldn't stop amazing :)
HOPE !!!! THERE'S LOTS OF HOPE IN THIS STORY FOR THOSE OF US WHO ARE NOT ONE OF THE 'BEAUTIFUL PEOPLE' AS THE WORLD DEFINES BEAUTY. THANKS FOR BRIGHTENING A DREARY DAY WITH SOME HOPE.
What a sexy story....perfect blend of story line, romance and fucking!
Amazing story in parts and have to say Ben was absolutely sexily mesmerising ! Hope and romance and lurve plus A+ sex = Brilliant story ! Have to say though Ben can't just go around beating up all Benji's exes.. Although that's the dream ! And Benji is a bit annoying and cries a bit too much. Also dunno if professions of love so readily made are so easily believed. Still Im gonna check out the rest of your stories after this :)
Your story made me shed a tear before the second page was halfway through....so touching and has a real life feel to it. Can't wait to read your other stories.
I loved this story. I love all your stories but this one was so real and so easy to relate to.
Another incredible story. You have to bundle all this great tales up and release it as a e-book!!!
What a great love story. Was so happy to read about Ben's and Benji's love
Keep up the good work!
even though I absolutely adore this story I wish you hadn't made Benji so weak and weepy.
I love all your stories, but this is one of my favourites. All their imperfections make Ben and Benji more real and relatable. When you really love somebody you accept their faults and learn to live with them because in real life no one is perfect - they are only perfect to you. Thank you for reminding us that no matter how weak, weepy, messy and yes stinky we are, there's always someone out there who thinks we are worth loving.
You're an accomplished writer. I enjoyed the non-sexual parts of the story even more than the sex, which is unusual for me!
This was a great story. It had a plot good sex scenes and cute characters. I love that there wasa story behind all this. And the characters were just amazingly adorable. The romance was so heartwarming. Keep up the good work!
it's really hard to find gay romance that isn't complete crap and i can honestly say that this is probably one of the best i have ever read!!! i can't wait to read some more of ur stories!!!
This was so pure, so right. I can't help but fall in love with all your characters.
This one is my favorite. I've read it a few times now and it gets to me each time. Absolutely amazing story.
it's really hard to find gay romance that isn't complete crap and i can honestly say that this is probably one of the best i have ever read!!! i can't wait to read some more of ur stories!!!
YOU ARE IN LUCK ALL OF ROBCOP'S STORIES WILL TOUCH YOUR HEART!
Hhonestly can't get over how good her stories are she needs to be getting this shit published and making some money!
So fucking hot. I do wish I had Ben as my boyfriend. Fucked by that
Massive 10 inch cock, HELL YEAH! Such a great story. Keep me updated. :D
the first time i read it i loved it. this time i found it cheesy...sorry...once ive read some thing i shouldnt go over it again.? lol
But ugh! stupid thing just wiped my comment. forgot this stupid thing doesn't have spell check (to admin - really? for comments to writers no spell/grammar check sucks big hairy "whatever;" you get it I hope; who learns from mispelling and bad grammar? fix it someday soon please!). Anyway, my take is great sweet story, not cheesy, want many sequels or at least a longer series. Especially am plugging for a Timber Pack sequel; really, really, really want to see/read more about those wolves (lots of good material you left as a foundation I think) . Thank you and keep writing! sorry, poor grammar but this is for expediency... I guess I could write and check in something like Word, and then paste in but really, just fix it! Love your writing! More please. Thanks!
This is my second time reading Big Ben and I love it even more now. This story is what finding love SHOULD be like for everyone. Since so many people have yet to find that type of unconditional love, I am happy that I can at least read about it. THANKS SO MUCH ROBCUB32!!!
second time reading this story and i absolutely love it!!! but i think Ben could have been a bit gentler during the sex scenes! but i give u 5 stars.
Just found out that robcub32 is still writing.
Check out the new story he's started. I'm sooooo excited. I love all of your stories robcub32!
http://www.gayauthors.org/author/robcub32
This one made me cry so many times. I hate it when people are bullied and picked on. This was my favorite so far...a beautiful love story and I could even see the beauty in Big Ben too, just like Benji did. I cried over how badly his father treated him. I cried over how sweetly Brandon and his mother accepted Benji and loved him. Ahh...f....k, it seems I cried almost as much as did Benji.
This is the third time I have read this story one of my all time favourites
Oh well there's nothing much left to say after all those other comments. It's a true robcub story in every particular. My favorite thing about Ben is how he insists on feeding Benji from the starts. That shows he is observant and kind and protective, which is what Benji needs.
In your story at one stage you said his dick was ten inches long then a bit farther down the page it was seven inches..... Just an obvious mistake.
sappy and cute and romantic and teary and hotter than hell
we're so lucky that you're a writer...
I actually love all of this author's stories, but why is the bottom man always some pathetic, crying little loser? I can understand when his family is not tolerant of his sexual preference, but these guys need to get a grip. They all end up with big, hairy bears over 6'3" who protects them and fall in love with them. I would love to have a man 10 inches taller and 100 pounds larger than me. Then he would be my 'BEAR'!!!
Everytime I read this I laugh, cry and enjoy this story. You are a great writer fyi tears are good and Benji is stronger than he looks
This story is really good....benji and ben are true lover where they protect each other. I wish i can find my true lover as like ben, but i am not small guy as like benji. Any bens here want to be mine....?
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Unfortunately I've used a lot of 5's in the past. This story and your writing deserve my first 10. Hoping that you have written more here for me to continue to enjoy.. Thanks !
I've read this story many times and its always like reading it for the 1st time. Gets me everytime. Robcub32 put the disclaimer a long time ago about writing these kinds of "big dude little dude,hurt/comfort" stories, so really no reason to question it.its always lovely. And when Benji says "Love you, Ben. Love you so much. My Ben. My man" melts me up everytime. Definitely my favorite story on Literotica
Im also a women and this IS the best story ive ever i will enjoy reading your other stories too. Your a really good writee keep it up
This story and the follow up of Brandan's story appeal to everyone not just gay males as a mother of four and grandmother of two I absolutely love all of Rob's stories and congratulate him on his recent wedding.
I would also ask Rob to consider writing a story on Ace as I have a feeling he is also gay and has a great story to be told. Maybe he is the bear to his own little benjie,so how about it Rob you up to the challenge.
I just finished reading both stories again and they hold your interest all the way through. Thosr 2 bears and theur little cubs are just appealing as hell. I don't know of your other stories but I would like to read them.
I have just finished this series again for the umpteenth time and it keeps getting better. I love all your stories so much and just bought your new book for my kindle too! Already read it and loved it. Please don't ever stop writing and posting! I hope to see a new story here soon!!
Robcub32, thank you for opening a whole new genre for me.
This is the first gay male story I've ever read. It's a topic that doesn't appeal to me sexually so I've always skipped the category. I do love big men with petite women and finally decided to read the first page and was absolutely hooked.
I was transfixed by the incredibly hot and romantic writing. It no longer mattered that I couldn't imagine myself in the scenario, I was rooting for Benji and Ben the entire way.
My only complaint is that Benji, Ben and Brandon seemed so "real" to me that now I want to hang out with them! (If any gay couple slightly resembling Benji and Ben see a woman staring with a dopey smile, that would be me).
Needs some serious editing. I'm not the best but I'm going to edit it so I can read it again later. One of my favorites.
This is trully amazing! I love your work. Once again I am captivated by your words. Keep up the great work!
Are we reading the same story? You know what editing means right?
Dharmie.
You should write a sequel for this, I would read it, along with your other works (Well, ones that I like LOL!)
Simply amazing. So emotional and still hot as hell! Thank you for this story! You are gifted!
i have to admit that after reading more of your work, I find myself readily placing you up there with the best authors on Lit. I so love your work.
...That I've read one of your stories. Wonderful tale of two opposites meeting and falling in love. Well written.
Beautiful, you had me crying at some points, but obviously I loved it. Great story :)
Is it bad that I read such a wonderful story, and all i can think of is how adorable that dog would be? I have a miniature schnauzer, and he is the cutest thing in the world...LOVE YOU TOBY!!!
I'm a straight woman but I love reading these kind of stories. This is beautifully written and is a wonderful love story. Keep writing more, you have a great talent.
It's nice to read 2 guys loving each other like they do. I have read this story 2 times and it is still interesting. Good writing.
Great piece of literature "Robcub32", it was an enthralling read, and a hot one at that.
well-written story. the sex is great. but the growning relationship of them is so sweet^^
the story is well-written. the sex szene are great and the growning realationship of them are sweet. one of the bst i read
I can't get over this couple - they are so lovely and their kindness towards each other is so moving, never mind the way they totally love each other ...
You know? At the beginning I was a bit bewildered by the way you described both Big Ben and Benji - but they both grew on me, and I fell in love !
Big Ben is so caring and giving, and Benji has such love for him - the poor little guy had to put up with so much: a lame excuse for a father, his first lover who was really a bastard, who abused him and a boss who was a prick who raped, brutalized and generally defiled him everytime he had the chance.
That Big Ben with his deceptively gruff manner took Benji under his wing was unexpected to say the least; but that, and a smile who showed how handsome he really was, was enough to conquer the little guy's heart.
Sooo good ! What a fantastic story ! Thank you so much. Please give us more !
I read all your stories.... One is better than the other... It's amazing how you describe everything in detail... Looking forward for more of your writing... <3
It always makes me cry, smile and believe in HEA.