by joea1000
I love your style. It's beautiful and thought-provoking. A strong Black woman is indeed a goddess. You rock.
Love the strong Black woman/submissive white girl theme. I just wish there was more sex to it. You hint at her humiliation and degredation, but never describe it in detail. Would love to see how you write such a scene. You apear to be a talented writer
Could do without the labia removal. But the rest of the story was erotic and enjoyable.
I would have enjoyed more bondage throughout as well, perhaps the young popstar has to wear a rhinestone collar 24/7? Great story though!
Reminds me a bit of "Black Girls Can't be Cheerleaders," but is unique in its own fashion while being every bit as hot. Extremely arousing. I almost lost it several times.
It was quite good. But this mind-control crap pulled it really down.
I really liked it until I came to the end of page one. Well seems I'm not into mind control and non-consensual stories...
There is something so erotic about TPE especially a this level, where a famous person gives up everything to serve her "Ebony Goddess" How wonderful that she was blonde, popular and beautiful, and ended up bald, desexed and a slave.