Loved this chapter! Its progressing very nicely. I love the characters also.
Will e definitely looking for the next chapter to come out. I think you're a really good writer and am loving your other story as well. Please dont wait too long to get the next part out! :)
u cannot stop there...what happens next???
Please keep writing I love stories that dnt go straight to the sex
Please write more, your story has alot of promise.
I have to know. What is the time period that all of this is taking place. And how old is the boy? Please continue this story, I'm looking forward to more.
i agree with others.....please write more....!
Of course, Kyle is Conall's mate and will eventually be turned. This story needs to be updated immediately. I hate starting a good tale only to have the author decide not to finish it.
i like these two...
please, write an ending for this story. it's just getting good.
Great story, quite gripping. What happens next? When is the next chapter coming? Soon???? Don't keep us waiting.....
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