by hopkinscm
the story its self is quite good, i enjoyed it. although i think perhaps it should be under erotic horror rather than incest/taboo.
I feel you did an excellent job at creating a modern fairy tale finding something people fear and showing a way in which that fear is overcome is the reason for fairy tales. I thought the sense of dread that surrounded the Other was excellently done as well and definitely places this story in the horror category.
Very good. Well written. I'm very impressed with your writing and will now read all of your contributions.
Thanks!