All Comments on '21st Century Subterranean Slavery Pt. 06'

I've read the entire series so far and have to say Bravo. This is a very good story, with a well thought out detailed plot and storyline. Thanks :) I love the novella aspect and the length.

The only criticism I have is please use their #s or something when describing one-eight-six and other females together. The she, she, she refrences become confusing and hard to follow. Also while small and infrequent, watch your grammatical and punctuation errors they can be distracting.

Other than that great job and thanks again!