by yeti8080k
i really loved this story. reminded me of when my brother and i used to...
Come on. You can't keep us hanging like this. Don't keep us waiting too long for the next instalment.
I have to read more. It was absolutely amazing and it can't be left like that.
I'm like evryone else, there is no way that you can leave us hangin like this. PLEASE make another chapter, and LONGER the next time.
Oh my God. That was damn hot. I loved it. Please, please, PLEASE don't leave this story as is. You should definitely write another, longer chapter. I will be eternally grateful to you. I love your writing.
--Soulless
That was FUCKING AMAZING! Please, please, PLEASE write the next chapter - your writing is unbelievable! :D
-- Mitch
you do not know how hot this is...please keep writing it...if its not the best its one of the most "WOW" stories here...write more of it...its so amazing
This sorry is so hot i keep reading it over and over again, i wish i had a brother like him. Please write the next chapter.
This is the hottest and most romantic story I have ever read!!! Please write more!!!! Please you have top!!
i wanna find out what happend ur such an amazing writer plz write more
You are a great fucking writer...like I can't stop reading its just so good..like heaven in every sequencial happenings between the two....LOVE IT..LOVE UR WRITING TECHNIQUES
Oh, shit, it's so hot, but this doesn't bode well for Darren... Don, either. Incest is kinky, NOT family-friendly.
I hope Chapter 5 wasn't the last one, I really wanna read about Darren on top, oh and a question, it said that Darren and Donovan had the same eyes, that they had blue-green eyes, I think it was on the first or second chapter, then when they go home for Ashley's B-Day, it said that they both had the same brown eyes, did i understand wrong?BTW, AMAZING, INCREDIBLE, HOT incest story, its the only one I've read that has more than a chapter.Love it and keep up the good work.
In my mind I'm picturing Darren painting Don's lightning struck profile at some point in the future. Loving this story. Love it even more that they got caught. But I sense that Ashleys cool. Gonna get to reading to find out more.