All Comments on 'Cemetery Summons Ch. 28'

Very good continuation of the story and this chapter meshed well with the previous one. I will look forward to reading the Epilogue. Nice job keep up the good work.

I'm sorry, but I still don't understand the big thing about Jack. You've made a sort of wide generalisation here, but there is so much more to be explained.

And whatever happened to dalaria? I suppose that will be in the epilogue...

This is great I can't wait for the final word of the story ....

wow, so much time and effort. This was a wonderful story and kept me hungry for more the entire way through. Unfotunatly all great things must come to an end so thank you for sharing this masterpiece with us. From a truly sated reader called Dave

You wont say in the story what Jack is but that's crazy to do that. But I will let my imaginary just do what does best and try to guess. Overall 5 star rating for the story great job.

Isn't it? Tirol is somehow the great granfather i think, cant be his gramps. And the that means jack is part incubus, part demon and part angel (or fallen angel to be specific)

I think that it is Jacks grandfather and not his great grandfather. But as for the part of him being a mix of Incubus and demon and fallen angel mix I think that's probably correct. But either way if he is a mix of all three that is a pretty potent mix dont you think.

so jack is part nephilim and demon, makes for a good mix :)

Im glad you put in the part about Tirol, because i would doubt anyone would guess it! That must be why he was so powerful to begin with :) i love this story.

I stayed up almost 23 hours to finish this in as close to a single sitting as possible. (Physical needs like food and arousal exceptions)

One of the best

-v