by orie
Work without sex-play was boring! -Ann needed a throbbing penis to play with, when contemplating addictive lifestyles like group sex-DP or BDSM activities, most readily available whilst relaxing without social inhibitions. Suggesting a mixed naked office environment for Ch. 7?
Great story. Well done. Good use of the long form to build excitement. Good details and a great payoff. Congrats!
Keeping stories real, nobody sheds moral inhibition, without expectation of their orgasmic rewards!
Having observed naked carnal activities, perhaps Ann can concede desire for public exposure, during leisure times? EG:Experiencing DP/group sexual encounters should enhance her professional standing, allowing pleasure in conceding sexual inhibitions, in return for simultanious male penetrations. Overcoming lesbian tenancies, experimental sexual freedom might liberate her fullest hetrosexual participations, in future multi-orgasmic activities.
So erotic. The buildup to the event(s) is a huge turn-on. It's good to see Ann lose her inhibitions.
I'm looking forward to her further adventures at Silver Pines and elsewhere.
Another wonderful chapter to an amazing story. Well written and highly erotic and VERY believable.
As always, thanks for sharing.
This was one of the most erotic, and hot, stories I've read on Literotica. I hope there's more to come, so to speak, soon. If not for Ann, then for other characters!
KEEP WRITING, YOU ROCK
Pirette
Please keep working as you have a great beginning & I'm curious where you will take it.
I just want to shave my pussy, landing-strip or bald I don't care, and go and find Jeb, Mag, Tam and hopefully Ann as well, and start enjoying life au naturel. This story is awesome!
I would have loved it if Jeb would have fucked me in the ass while Tam was licking my hot, wet pussy! mmmmmmmmmmm. thanks for a wonderful love story. lacyracheau@yahoo.com
Orie, such a tender and wonderful story of opening to the possibilities. You are a skilled storyteller, capturing the enjoyment of first nudist experience to the thrill of mixed sport and polyamorous relating.
Looking forward to more of your work.
I may be a bit biased, since this reminds me so much of my "Summer Voodoo" chapter and Christina's sexual awakening, but this is probably my favorite of yours so far. Between this one and "A Star Is Born—Naked," it's a tough call.
Excellent writing, sir.
I've loved each of the stories in the series and would love to see you continue them.
Enjoyed the slow build up...the passion...the thaw...the eventual willingness to explore! Thanks for this one!
This promised to be another well plotted tale, this time on the ENF theme. The first chapters were erotic, though too rushed to believe she would get over her inhibition in so short a time. The ending descended into boring porno movie choreography, which is not what we expect from you. On the positive side, good plotting and dialog but no character development to speak of. Great that you featured tall strong women rather than the worrying 5'/150cm child women that so many other writers seem to like.
Although it has been a few years since you wrote chapter 6, you could easily pick this up and continue it for the rest of their stay - and more if Ann goes back. Maybe even with Carey ?
If you do read this, please think about it - it has been a great story so far, but there is more to come still if only you would write it.
Please think about it - thanks !
I know it has been a few years, but like Rapier said, it is an awesome story and I can see many more chapters !!
I agree with the previous posters. It would be great to see a continuation. Great story !
I wasn't expecting an orgy so soon in this story, or rather ever, but it come good way and I enjoyed it mighty. But, it now left me crazy for more, for continuation of the story, to see the new, slightly different Ann, awake from her inhibitions and now enjoying everything there is.
There so much potential to keep it going. If I understood it right, they planned to stay there for a full week still at this point? If that's true, that accounting will be finished in the nude, and I would absolutely love to read about that. And I also think it would be completely realistic if that means to take the story down from the high point to much more "boring" times without massive sex all the time, but it could also easily be building up for more and/or different as well later again. And then the shock, when after many complete days in the buff it time to go back to the now alien clothed world.
This is a wonderful story which was slow developing then speed up to its finale. Plenty of opportunities to take this further in or out of the camp / work / life as Ann overcomes her inhibitions. Well written.
A wonderful tale of a woman growing into a fuller version of herself. Thanks for this series.
Others have encouraged you to expand Ann's story, begged to see Ann live out her warning 'Look our world' and 'Look out Silver Pines'. Of course, I would also welcome such stories.
Another idea (pardon me if I'm repeating, I didn't read all 27 comments) I think would be fun, would be to peek in on other visitors to Silver Pines and to the other 2 camps. While watching Ann take on the world, it would be interesting to see others' encounter themselves, perhaps their lovers & friends, as they visit a naturist camp.
I hope all goes well for you. Thanks for sharing.