All Comments on 'Rachel's Renaissance ch. 01'

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MyMPTPMyMPTPabout 13 years ago
Very, very good.

It's steamy, and dirty and hot.

Great blend of raunch and relationship - always a plus.

And while I can see why you put it in "anal," I guess, it's really so much more than just an anal sex story. The anal's good, but all the rest of the sex is hot, too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
yes very very good indeed

do you work for some fucked up womens journal?

the spark is away , good end it

she acts for a random asshole like a submissive and does anything he wants, good go into pornbusiness but stay away from guys who wants a realtionship

you fuck bareback , good why don't you shoot yourself, this way you cant give aids to somebody else.

dumb and stupid storyline

April0647April0647about 13 years ago
Serious?

Their naivete is quite amusing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
its fantasy

he's a "wimp" because it's a device for you to get off on..this is masturbation fantasy, people. they do not exist. dur

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Strange Pre-Cuckoldry

He obviously hadn't gotten her virgin mouth or pussy. Now, even though they're in a relationship, he doesn't get her anal cherry either, and he's apparently alright with that too. Who would do that? That assertion detracts from the story.

SigintSigintabout 9 years ago
He Now Has A Fucktoy

The "spark" was already gone, no need to lose her, just transition her. You're not in love. What's the harm? You're young, virile, and you obviously couldn't care less. Stock up on condoms and enjoy!

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