by gmikeisbad
what are you doing here? there is nothing sexy or erotic about this. even at the first where she has him hooked up there is nothing really erotic about it, nothing to turn anyone on. you are wasteing my time. i've read three chapters, its 11:30pm, your showing me nothing (including talent), and i'm outta here.
I have no idea where this story is going at this point. Seems to be just meandering around. What is the purpose of all this?