All Comments on 'Close Quarters'
by Antonio_y_Cleopatra
- 11 Comments
Snakebitalmost 13 years agoAll the women are supposed to have DD's and the guys 10 inchers didn't you get the memo? Seriously though well done nicely paced and not over done, very hot.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoYou built the trust of the characters through the love they already have for their spouse. Great job. One of the best I've read.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agofucking for an audience and having the favor returned. Now they need to fuck the other's spouse!
Anonymousover 8 years agoThe story was different in that it was loving, erotic, and NO swapping. Superb!
Anonymousover 5 years agoA rarity...a different plot line here at lit 😁 well written too, although a few less.adjectives would be even better. A well earned 5 star s
Shenachie2010about 5 years agoI was getting into it when the girls names got confused then basic errors showed up. Waste for waist and so on.
An editor would help you here, otherwise, it was great.
KYJOHN2955almost 5 years agoVery nice. I fantasized being in it myself and stayed arroused through the whole story. This will be one that I read regularly.
yarnspinnerrabout 2 years agoDespite the occasional error I enjoyed this very much. (I make mistakes in my stories too, so can't really deduct points for that, lol)
And yes I am definitely going to the next chapter! ;->
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