All Comments on 'Shift In The Right Direction Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Amazing story:)

Thanks for taking the time to update this.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wonderful

Looking forward to her reply. Soon yes?

canndcanndover 12 years ago

I am anxious to learn more of who he is...how did his family get this gift? Has he known her in past lives or always looked for her? Tell us more of their powers. great story. I really loved the love scenes. they were very sensual and you brought the emotions out between them also. keep writing!

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 12 years ago
Okay, so they're really hot together.

Why did he choose her and what exactly does he mean about sharing all his blessings with her?

fefe428fefe428over 12 years ago
Really Enjoying

This is a great story. I'm really enjoying it. I'm interested to see where you're planning on going with it.

lisaisaleftylisaisaleftyover 12 years ago
This is great!

Great writing and great story. I am looking forward to what happens next. 5 Stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More please!

I am very excited to see more from Charlotte and Lucas, please continue.

barbette_sgbarbette_sgabout 10 years ago

Definitely continue their story...love, love, love :D

bearsladybearsladyover 9 years ago
wow

what a hot, excellent story. 5 from me

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

please finish, one of the best stories i've read in a while

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Please add more

ShannonBlackwaterShannonBlackwateralmost 7 years ago
Will this story be finished?

Please say you're finishing this! 😢

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Another unfinished story

OH! how I hate those authors who leave us 'hanging'. Please...Please...Please finish this series.

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