All Comments on 'Ed's Hot Wife'

by Seurat

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hikewithapackhikewithapackabout 12 years ago
Great fun!

I loved the twist. hot Hot HOT !!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
nice

good job.....had to read it twice....loved the twist!

nakdsubnakdsubabout 12 years ago
Damn!

I wish I could vote twice, that way I could give this story 5* a second time.

I loved it, thanks.

deadonedeadoneabout 12 years ago
Do not skip read!

Warning!

Do skip read the story!

5* This is in line with a classic HDK story!

I made a mistake the fist time.

This was very good! Loved the red herring or was that red Habanero?

Very sorry about the first review. This is the kind of loving wife I love to read.

Seurat if you could, please remove the first posting. Thank you.

SeuratSeuratabout 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Glad y'all enjoyed it. I have a couple of more lined up; I just have to finish the last 5% (of each). I hope you like them, too.

@deadone - comment removed per request.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
braindeadone pulled a Random

Commenting before reading means you are an asshole but at least you corrected yourself, more than I can say for Random. Great take on the word "hot" by the author, some much needed levity into a oft-sad category.

LickideesplitLickideesplitabout 12 years ago
LIT reader

Sound's like Ed's Hot Wife reads LIT...probably the Interracial and LW segments!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
LitEROTICA

And this is erotic, how? 1 Star

CoffeemuggCoffeemuggabout 12 years ago
That's how

a loving wife should be! Faithful!

MarvinSMarvinSabout 12 years ago
Favorite

I think I have another favorite author. Good job. Keep 'em coming!

DunaDunaabout 12 years ago
An excellent TLW story

Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha 5 stars for a smart TL wife!!!!!!! DGHear's excellent story A New Begining Bree's story came to my brain.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
modicum of makeup????????????????????

How does the viewer know she will be hot in bed or wild as he put it. Is Perry a fag.

Great story, Weak White wimp should read this and see how black man one is sooo freaking shit apparently 27 chapters of crap just don't cut the mustard or black sauce.

great story man keep it up i really enjoyed this and im black and white Irish English the works man. Keep writing

BetterEndingBetterEndingalmost 10 years ago
Fantastic

A really fun story. Now that is a loving wife. Thanks and keep writing!

christmas_apechristmas_apeover 7 years ago

i love these cheating with consequences stories.

thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Hahahaha!

That's taking the ol stereotype and placing it on its ear !

SomeOneTwoThreeSomeOneTwoThreeover 6 years ago
Thanks!

Wonderful story and well written.

Top ratings.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Loved it

Great twist

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Fun

That was one hellasiouslly funny story. Like others I almost passed it by. So glad I didn't. If anyone reads this comment , go read this little "hotwife"story.

silentsoundsilentsoundover 5 years ago
5*

For fun factor alone. I loved your Candy character!

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Reading again

Best hotwife for bbc that I have ever read and I usually don't read those. As I commented previously, read this one and you'll love it.

26thNC26thNCabout 4 years ago

Read this again along with Seur's cuckold story. My favorite ir/midwife story ever.

robroy93robroy93about 4 years ago
Best ir

Best ir hot wife story I've ever read anywhere! What a gem of a wife

skramskramabout 2 years ago

LOL! Loved this story and is parody of the cliches. Great ending!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Don't normally read non-erotic but this story was very entertaining. Good job. Loved Candy.

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