All Comments on 'I Kissed a Girl Ch. 01'

really good will there be chapter 2 may be in tuscany i hope so

Hey,

~I adore the slow burn. The story line so believable, and your characters were also believable.

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Great writing. I hope you continue with this and make a series.

Please do another part I loved it!!!

This was lovely. Thank you. And I can't wait to hear what happens at the villa in Tuscany. ;) ~ L

tsk tsk. another one for the "dark side!" lol. good writing! can't wait for more chapters!

Absolutely superb. Very well done and erotic!

Need I say more? Please please please continue this story. I cannot wait to read it. Such a great story thank you.

You write so well, so sensitive...

From the opening paragraph this seemed to be great writing and the rest of the story proved it. Thanks

A beautifully written story,thank you so much!!!!

That was hott !

Read like it was written while the story was played out.

Janice

It was a very good story and it had a fantastic ending

good build up well done

Good story, realistic characters, beautiful writing. Loved it!

Great first part. Onto the next one. Thank you

You are a very skilled and artful writer. Verbs lie and lay, misused, protrude more than they would in the work of a lesser writer.

Bill

I really liked the way the rainy weather emphasized her gloomy mood and I loved the serendipity of meeting her old friend in the lounge. But a guy calling off an engagement with a girl he had been with for two plus years over the phone? And saying he never wanted to see her again even just to collect his stuff? Are there guys that are really that callous and if so would she had been in a relationship with someone like that? Just seems the man bashing aspect of that was a bit excessive.

I love how you develop your stories, they are so easy to read. The character development is wonderful. I find myself caring about the characters and I'm sad when the story is over

of the most precious kind. When two people find each other when they aren't looking, it's damn special. I love when love dissolves pain. Write or read further? You've screwed up my plans for the weekend.

It's good when you take your time.

Love the build and descriptive writing technique.

Wow I can't believe I've never read this story until I saw chapter 10 posted - read it and loved it. I see I'm in for a treat. Glory, I have 8 more chapters to go. This is turning out to be an awesome series. My scarf's off to Secretsxywriter for writing such a beautiful storyline with depth and dimension in characters and plot. (Thank you)

Like many here, I'm surprised that this wonderful story never showed up until now! I'm very delighted that I've found your story and I get to enjoy the rest of it! Thank you so much for sharing this with us!

Smile ..... Girls need to be threaten greatful

Very nicely done!!!!! Beautiful scenes between the two. Looking forward to the rest.

How come Danny broke it off with Kat? There is no reason at all given.

And after her punching him for no reason at all (you do NOT punch your ex for any reason), Kat's lucky she isn't in jail.

Methinks that was just a *bit* too ... coincidental?

We shall see...

"As long as you don't talk back to the voices, you should be fine....funny my grandma used to say that