by mythila
Descriptive, imaginative, erotic and believable. Great job, please continue to write!
Thank you very much for the encouragement. Your opinion, good or bad counts immensely and will eventually lead to even better stories!! Thank you!!
It's very sensual and erotic, and has excellent pace. The slow build to the climax is very titillating, and isn't bogged down with mundane details. Keep this formula working, it's a great read.
Mythla,
You have ways with sexual acts and surrounding description. Please write more about your sexual experiences and or fantasies..
Looking forward to your comments on my stories.
Indian Erotica writers must have a forum to discuss, share ideas and suggestion.
I liked the style...... very erotic!... looking frwd for more like this. Jack