by Midday_Crisis
Thanks for this excellent series, hope to read more sequels.
The story line is developing nicely. Keep going, but please leave 'Reba' out of it.
The story is flowing well. I can see Reba surfacing briefly and being confronted by Paige.
I think the series is going great, I just hope u leave Reba out of it.
Don't be long with next chapter.Try not to screw it up with the return of "The Reba"
Great work. Reba acts as a vehicle where Paige can vent out her insecurities. Having her back, and in open conflict, will allow both protagonists to grow.
I have been following this story since the beginning, and I simply love it. In the 1980s, I had similar affair with a young 18 year old while I was 24 years old. It lasted 4 months, because the distance between us made it impossible for us. Though she did write to me for a few years afterwards. Keep doing what you are doing, and we should all be satisfied.
From Chapter 1, this story has just gotten better and better. I've loved every one. Midday_Crisis, you're the best.
Enjoying this storyline, but #7 especially had a lot of grammar mistakes in it, takes away from the reading after a while.