by ollizvell
Good luck to you Americans ,the Indian wimps with Bollywood wives are coming. to you.Meet any Indian man you are in for a good ride..
for you to do is to either stop writing or get a brain please stop writing because i would hate to see what you would write with a brain.
I do NOT see a wife cheating on, or sharing with, her husband in this vignette (until the end, AFTER the rape!)
Without looking, I could tell this was your first submitted story. I doubt it is telling actual events but it was interesting. I also get a kick out of the ignorant comments directed at you. Mostly, they don't like the subject of the story because if they did, it might diminish their own manhood... though I have a hunch they'd be the first to piss their pants had someone put a gun to their heads before such treatment ensued. But it is easier to insult you and your story to make themselves feel superior. Not a bad first effort.
3 stars.
Run back to India,abandon the wife (she will be an illegal immigrant in no time) divorce her by proxy use the US legal system to the brim unless you are a stupid Indian.
typical big cock whore indian slut whose husband will never be able to satisfy the lust for white man's cum. 'alpha' should have made wimpy cuckold suck the cum out of her cunt.
I liked it but I think you need more detail. Other than that great story. Write
More!
Either this is completely fiction or you don't understand Indian women. Even the women who fuck outside the wedlock are not the way you described. Indian men don't raise the kids of others.
You made a start and tried good fiction. However you made so many insulting comments which are not appropriate.
I love how people are talking to the author like this really happened, and now he needs advice. Hahaha. This story must strike a chord.
keep it up. write more like this or more humiliating etc.... its only fantasy
one of The Best Stories!!!
i feel, it happened in real!!i am an indian cuck :)
Thanks for posting this. I'm not sure why commenters get so mean, but that's another topic for another forum.
My wife and I almost never speak about the beatdown I received at the fists of her boss 8 years ago because we don't need to. "Our" half-white daughter is all the proof that's needed. We're black, and though the grandmothers have seen the child, we've cut ourselves off from the rest of our families. We've just been too embarassed, and me, too in denial to admit to myself that I couldn't protect my wife from a fat 55 year old white guy.
And though he only need to kick my ass once, he kept taking the pussy that should have been mine during and even after the birth. Thanks Ollizvell for permission to tell my story.
@Anon If you lives in such country you should look for a good lawyer and a lawsuit against the biological father..........8 years children support money.
Love the story
Want my wife to be taken regularly by white men and boys and made pregnant.
I will be the clean up cuck
We should not shit-talk this story in view of the fact it has got 39 favorites, whereas many stories get up to 3.
The storyline was very well conceived but it should have been better crafted.