All Comments on 'Iron Girders and Steel Springs'

Wow, but I have one question - Vasya is a man's name. ????? Oh yeh, how is Phil doing??? Tell him I miss him A LOT.

Only one missed open quotation mark. Manyeyed, you've written a good one.

Inari is the safety net of sexually frustrated hapless good guys everywhere.

Not exactly my thing, but well-written regardless. Are we ever going to see what Inari was like before she became concerned about humanity, or has she always been that way?

I have been nude in Scotland and it gave a new meaning to the term "blue balls".Apart for that minor criticism an excellent story .

Not my kind of thing at all I'm afraid, but it was very well written. Bit too 'bestial'. Giving it five stars still for quality of writing though.

Can't wait for you to get back to succubi and sizzling demon reptile girls though!

I almost feel grateful when you don't kill the main guy off nowadays, didn't see the point of killing the other visitors though, a bit odd for Inari to use murderers in her work, I think.

I think the story would have worked well without the horror elements. Or without the nudist elements. Seems a bit like two stories combined into one.

Aw, fuck the details. Catgirls forever!

My only complaint is that I was really looking forward to him having sex with Kath in her human form. She sounds sooooooo hot. :)

great work m8 wud like for more to follow , wud of bin cool for him to be infected other than that well done

Which is appropriate considering the category!

This was another great story and I liked the Kath/Marshall interactions; her unabashed sex kittenhood was both cute and appealing, however I have to agree with the other poster and say the reason the ending was so chilling was because there was nothing really to suggest the others had done anything to deserve their fate.

Not that that's necessarily wrong; it could be argued to be the core of the predator/prey dynamic, however, for myself I found it more unsettling than your other stories where someone meets an untimely end.

I do have to ask though; if these women regularly do away with their clients... how do they stay in business? There's no one to spread the word. Also, if they're charging a few thousand pounds for a weekend but no one ever survives to come back, people are going to start asking questions.

In any case, it was still a thrilling read. Thank you.

Brilliant!! And the City types are predators and parasites without conscience anyway - I enjoyed them getting their just desserts! :)

I always admired your imagination and right balance between story telling and eroticism, and I do hope to discover your fine stories for many years in the future.

Having said that, and having spend as a boy-scout (many many years ago) a whole summer in Scotland, I did see magnificent sights, lots of heather (had to use google US->French translation to know what you meant), but the idea of a nudist camp in its wilderness did not strike me as an obvious first choice. It's situated quite in the Northern part of Europe and it's quite rainy and cool. However, it did not deter me from enjoying a very nice story. I hope that the two main characters will meet again, and that you will have a well deserved high rank in the present competition.

I will perfectly understand that you veer away from succubus stories, to embrace other subjects, but I must agree with some other comments that I really really enjoy your succubus themed stories, since they do tickle some part of my ... imagination.

Thanks for your time and for sharing your obvious talent with us.

Paris, France.

@tarotb - don't forget that the full moon doesn't always fall on a weekend, and I get the impression that they only hunt on the full moon.

This was just .. perfect. Not too long, not too short. Keeps interest going and doesn't force itself. Nice pacing and a good ending. Keep them coming >.>

I'd love to see more about Kath, but the entire concept, and the way you executed it, was great. Loved the twist at the end too.

Really enjoyed the story. The character development was amazing and it seems you've added another lady to Inari's listings. Hope to see more of Kath in the future.

Congrats on another win, my friend. Keep 'em coming.

Definitely different from your usual fare but very good. I see you also left it open for a possible follow up. If you ever write it I'll be reading it.

Would like to pick up again with Marshall when he goes to his next counselling session with Inari.

Would love to see a sequel story to this one. Interesting to See you write about were beasts.

Brilliant.

Structure, suspense, twist. Erotic and thrilling. Thank you so much.

I can't get off to this; it's too absorbing and visceral a story! Bah!

Been a fan of your works for a number of years and loved reading a story that was set in my own back yard ;) you are always detailed and you definitely deserved a win with this one.

Honestly you should look into a full novel! You already have one with Phil, you sure have talent mate! You always have great endings, but with this story has the best potential for a truely happy ending should a sequal arise (Halloween submission?).

Thank you for a great story

awesome funny ass twist and very frigging good

Yet another story that shows how good of a writer you are! (I also wouldn't mind you making more stories about Kath, that would be cool)

Excellent story. Not enough stories out there about female werewolves. It's sad that females have to be portrayed as the weaker sex in so many werewolf stories. I hope you'll consider a sequel maybe centered Maruska and Vasya. Maybe they could fall in love with a human or something and he could live in the brothel with them and serve the werewolves.

5 * for sure :)

Sexy funny and impressive!

A bit on the cryptic side, not really enough information. But still a stimulating story!

I wanna know more about inari! I love the stories about her clients and they're always seems like she is saving the good people using demons.

All the other assholes died, to the girls and marshall survived because of miss kitson. hahaha! motherfuckers!

i was hoping for a better ending it would be much better if he ended up deciding to stay in the brothel and maybe become a werewolf so he can fuck with kath wildly forever. and also i was pretty sure the driver was a werewolf too, pretty disapointing

I loved the backstory about Marshall, and Kath's wonderful, understanding nature. It's too bad that she's treated as "the waitress" by the other "girls", though she can be tough and protective when necessary. I especially enjoyed the story because while the impetus was Marshall and his shyness about his (now scarred) body, the development of Kath's tale, and her empathy and kindness elevated this story to become an exceptional tale.

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Enjoy your stories very much.

I have a polite suggestion, perhaps you could do one where the succubus demon gets a very nasty surprise and is defeated, enslaved, crushed etc. by what she thought was a puny human, but the human turns out to have special skills and knowledge and turns the tables on her completely after using her for his pleasure.

As usual, your stories are just worth the read. Thank you for a great ending too. (I do not want to elaborate as to not give out any spoilers.)

Great story, I just wish we could get a sequel.

A truly tender and fantastic story. I wish they’d make stories like these for films or a television series.

The thing I don't get...how can they possibly get away with it? Those men were wealthy, and well-known. Someone knew where they were going, and then they never returned. How can the weres get away with *eating* all their clients, without anyone wondering why everyone who goes to this exclusive nature brothel...ends up never coming back?

Just struck me as...improbable. I liked the story, though. Just struggled with the practical aspects of a homicidal/carnivorous brothel, that caters to the wealthy. I know I'm overthinking it, can't help it.

Great story. I just wish we could get a sequel.

Someone else echoed my same thoughts, "how the hell can they get away with it?". But this is a fictional story and so shit happens and you just need to go with the flow, lol. I'm guessing there may be more to Dr. Inari Kitson than meets the eye. Good story, thanks.