by Jim_and_Sarah
Very hot little description. I started to write how improbable it was then remembered an odd encounter, in my youth, that was not all that different in many respects. Thanks for sharing.
I almost never feel this about a story on Lit, but I have to say it. This is perfect, just perfect.
Thank you... an amazing amount of detail... so I felt as though I was there
Thank you for this great story. I have to say that a lot of times when looking for story's to enjoy I'm looking for,,, More then you can get in a book from the book store down the road. A lot of times when author's write multiple page stories there is ALOT of back round that while good for the story is hard to get through to find that extra bit. This one was great because while you gave a story line and plot you didn't spend 2 1/2 pages getting to the good part. 5 star's from me, and I almost never give out the star's ... Thank you
The story was incredibly erotic. The writing was perfect. It had such a perfect flow I found I was listening to his thoughts complete with heavy breathing and exclamations. Really excellent story!
Scotsman said it. This is perfect, and breathtaking, and searingly hot, and just so damn splendid and compelling. I will be in a haze for the rest of this day. At least.
--MJtGD
This one really gets the blood racing! I haven't been so aroused in a long time.
Jim is perfection
Well written and definitely hot, but I also couldn't stop laughing. You sent up the 'worried I'm gonna get killed by these people' so well and then he does all that? I kept waiting for Farmer John to bust through the door. Does sweet little Sarah turn loose the cows on rainy nights to get some action?
That was fucking hot. My God. I think I came three times reading that!
I really enjoyed this story. It was bright and refreshing, completely out of the norm from what I have read online, at least most of the time. I truly enjoyed it. Fun, exciting, and nuanced in many ways. Nicely done and very picturesque in your wording. Thanks for the entertaining read.
I mean god damn. Hot build up(foreplay isn't just for vanilla sex, guys), hot spanking, hot sex. What more could a girl ask for?