All Comments on 'Riding the Wolf Ch. 05'

by LaSalia

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KvotheKvotheover 11 years ago
Another Very Good Story

But...could I perhaps encourage you to offer more attention to your Cinder Whore series? It's clearly awaiting a sequel, and Ellie is one of the most adorable (and unfortunate) characters I've ever seen fleshed out in erotic literature, amateur or otherwise.

It's only a request, of course. I understand that authors like to move toward whatever juices happen to be flowing at the time.

LadyKillingPerfectionLadyKillingPerfectionover 11 years ago
YES!!!!

I am so glad you updated. I like the idea of this Jimmy guy. Maybe Hunter will return and Jimmy will be his rival for Rosita??? One can only hope. Good job and I can't wait to read what you do next.

DeRacoDeRacoover 11 years ago
Roar!

Competition always spices things up, YAY!

jazz1190jazz1190over 11 years ago

I cant wait to read the next chapter love it

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 11 years ago
Where is Hunter?

Watching Rosita lose herself and allow herself to be abused again is disheartening. She needs another tiger.

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 11 years ago
She's sounds so very pretty!!!!

Honey-

Just can't wait for the next chapter. You draw a picture of a very lovely feline. I can see little Miss Rosita in my mind's eye and she is gorgeous!!!!

Jimmy may prove to be her savior until Hunter returns.

Was so sad for her loss. She is such a wounded child.

NaughtyMirokuNaughtyMirokuover 11 years ago
Keep Going

All right now this story has some strong legs to move onto. So now go onto the next chapter and keep going with it, from what I can see there are a lot of eager fans waiting for some more.

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 11 years ago
Poor girl

Maybe her inner tiger will give her strength to bear her pain.

oneboobeeoneboobeeover 11 years ago

This is a sad story!!!! I am enjoying it, just wish this child could have some happiness in her life!!!!!

panda1870panda1870over 11 years ago
awesome

Please do tell us what happens next!

I can't wait any longer lol

Zangetsu21Zangetsu21over 11 years ago
Fantastic

I am loving this series, can't wait for the next chapter.

Littlecat76Littlecat76over 11 years ago
Please keep going

This story has a nice originality please keep it up

Charlie15Charlie15almost 11 years ago
Ah, man. That's it?!

Really wish this story had been fleshed out a little more.

countrygirlflacountrygirlflaalmost 11 years ago
Is there another chapter???/

Seems like it needs a bit more,,hunter to come back,,,,and it has been since august of 2012,since this was posted,so i guess another chapter is out of the question,,,another unfinished story,,,such a waste,,,for you as a writer and your readers that took the time to read all this far....

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
...Thats it...??

Wished this was finished off somehow.. it doesn't seem like it should be the ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
3:) grate strory

well ummm its something i just found rl sucks sometimes i hope you can finish your others and share chapter six with us. your talented love your stories9c31

PuppyLov3rPuppyLov3ralmost 10 years ago
:D

Please write more, this has been one of the greatest stories I have seen here and I would love to see more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Please finish the story

ClotelClotelover 8 years ago
Yes please finish the story

I'd really like to know what happens now

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Tigers and lions are bigger than wolves so according to were logic wereions and weretigers should be bigger than werewolves

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

amazing story! thanx! hope 2 see the end 1 day..

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Enjoyable

I enjoyed them all. Please continue as I like the hear what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Love it more please

Love the series can't wait for more. Please continue the story I want to know what happens next.

justablonde2000justablonde2000about 7 years ago
Great story

I hope you write more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Hoping

I'm really hoping you come back to this story. I've enjoyed reading it.

A_StoneA_Stoneover 6 years ago
Please!

Don't leave us hanging!

Fluffy_MonstersFluffy_Monstersover 6 years ago
Why?

I love hidden jems like this. I love story’s that are really nitty gritty and relentless in how the characters are, but sadly these precious jems are usually left unfinished. Upsetting? Of course i’ve Been on this site for long enough to know that if an author has been gone for more then 2 or 3 years then it’s so unlikely to get finished that it just leaves me so stupidly frustrated that it makes me not want to invest in a story if I see the author takes really long hiatuses or if it hasn’t been updated in a really long time. So am I upset? Fuck yea this was super interesting and I really was hoping to see how Rosita would have handled Hunter coming back(if he was ever intended to). I wanted to see that development but after seeing that LaSalia hasn’t been on since 2013 I feel like I shouldn’t even bother.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I hope that you continue this story! I read it maybe 6 years ago and just re-read it for the thrid time. Very talented writer!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The only regret is not knowing what happens next it is a pure suspense builder that it pains not knowing the end

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