by LaSalia
But...could I perhaps encourage you to offer more attention to your Cinder Whore series? It's clearly awaiting a sequel, and Ellie is one of the most adorable (and unfortunate) characters I've ever seen fleshed out in erotic literature, amateur or otherwise.
It's only a request, of course. I understand that authors like to move toward whatever juices happen to be flowing at the time.
I am so glad you updated. I like the idea of this Jimmy guy. Maybe Hunter will return and Jimmy will be his rival for Rosita??? One can only hope. Good job and I can't wait to read what you do next.
Watching Rosita lose herself and allow herself to be abused again is disheartening. She needs another tiger.
Honey-
Just can't wait for the next chapter. You draw a picture of a very lovely feline. I can see little Miss Rosita in my mind's eye and she is gorgeous!!!!
Jimmy may prove to be her savior until Hunter returns.
Was so sad for her loss. She is such a wounded child.
All right now this story has some strong legs to move onto. So now go onto the next chapter and keep going with it, from what I can see there are a lot of eager fans waiting for some more.
This is a sad story!!!! I am enjoying it, just wish this child could have some happiness in her life!!!!!
Really wish this story had been fleshed out a little more.
Seems like it needs a bit more,,hunter to come back,,,,and it has been since august of 2012,since this was posted,so i guess another chapter is out of the question,,,another unfinished story,,,such a waste,,,for you as a writer and your readers that took the time to read all this far....
Wished this was finished off somehow.. it doesn't seem like it should be the ending.
well ummm its something i just found rl sucks sometimes i hope you can finish your others and share chapter six with us. your talented love your stories9c31
Please write more, this has been one of the greatest stories I have seen here and I would love to see more!
Tigers and lions are bigger than wolves so according to were logic wereions and weretigers should be bigger than werewolves
I enjoyed them all. Please continue as I like the hear what happens next.
Love the series can't wait for more. Please continue the story I want to know what happens next.
I'm really hoping you come back to this story. I've enjoyed reading it.
I love hidden jems like this. I love story’s that are really nitty gritty and relentless in how the characters are, but sadly these precious jems are usually left unfinished. Upsetting? Of course i’ve Been on this site for long enough to know that if an author has been gone for more then 2 or 3 years then it’s so unlikely to get finished that it just leaves me so stupidly frustrated that it makes me not want to invest in a story if I see the author takes really long hiatuses or if it hasn’t been updated in a really long time. So am I upset? Fuck yea this was super interesting and I really was hoping to see how Rosita would have handled Hunter coming back(if he was ever intended to). I wanted to see that development but after seeing that LaSalia hasn’t been on since 2013 I feel like I shouldn’t even bother.
I hope that you continue this story! I read it maybe 6 years ago and just re-read it for the thrid time. Very talented writer!
The only regret is not knowing what happens next it is a pure suspense builder that it pains not knowing the end