All Comments on 'A Cougar Totally Turned Ch. 07'

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1Martiniman1Martinimanover 11 years ago
Five Wonderful Stars!

This has been a spectacular story thru every chapter. Thank you so much for the fabulous journey you took us on. A must read for anyone who enjoys stories filled with eroticism and love!

Five simple words...Thank you, you are wonderful!

idrubloodidrubloodover 11 years ago
That was a brilliant flight of fancy.

I have been in awe of your ability since day one of this series. The ups and downs, the laughter and sadness, the eroticism and the joy of finding love. It all came together so beautifully. I thank you most sincerely for bringing this wonderful reading experience to me.

Keep up the exceptional work.

IDB.

elle_9549elle_9549over 11 years ago
Just awesome

As I've said so many times before, I absolutely LOVED this story. It had just the right amount of ... well, of everything. Absolutely brilliant! It ended just like I hoped it would, except that I didn't want it to end at all! I cried at their wedding. I thank you, once again, for sharing this story and your talents with us. I will certainly miss these two, but I look forward to what you write next. :) All my best to you ~ L

hoosier76hoosier76over 11 years ago
Thank you!

Just a fantastic LOVE story! Looking forward to reading more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

thank you for an absolutely wonderful journey - keep up the good work! <3

deliciousthoughtsdeliciousthoughtsover 11 years ago
very good

I see you're getting all the tributes you deserve.

Fab :)

gofastTTguygofastTTguyover 11 years ago
Fantastic

Really well done. So well written. I could not tear myself from this story and all of the fantastic twists it took. Thank you and I look forward to many more from you.

WistfulSeniorWistfulSeniorover 11 years ago
Wonderful Story!

This has been just a wonderful story. I loved your writing style, the twists and turns and, of course, the characters. You had me from the very beginning and I just could not turn away until I finished the last chapter. Exceptional writing. Thank you for sharing.

MGU67MGU67over 11 years ago
Wow

I loved this story, it was so beautifully written, thank you so much

leann5redleann5redover 11 years ago
deautifull store

from strate ot finshit, was deautifully written, plz write more soome love leannxxx

SexoSudoryCalorSexoSudoryCalorabout 11 years ago
One Word...

Amazing. :)

I loved every bit of it. You're, without a doubt, one of my fav writers. :)

JogrindeJogrindeabout 11 years ago
That's one of the most fantastic stories I have read on this site

It was a perfect telling start to finish, I lik ethe fact that there were cha[ers with lovers secrets and they were kept as secret, but if flowed so sensually and correctly that it begged to be read! Especially the characters that you created, well the L word writers should be fired and you hired!! LOL

That was wicked and I like how you ended it with a note of what love really is Harmony "We love each other; our lives are full. We work, we play, we see friends, and we love, fully, wantonly, and often!! " I say no more!!!

dgowredgowreabout 11 years ago

Totally brilliant and beautiful. With one little exception, one of the sweetest stories I've read in a very long time. The exception? The dinner with Lin and Kat, when Julia was made to dress in such an excruciating and demeaning way. That one little episode didn't work for me at all.

sarahwalker10sarahwalker10almost 11 years ago

This is an amazing & wonderful story. This was so entertaining. I laughed, I cheered, I clapped and I was in awe. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. My life is richer for it.

laritialaritiaover 10 years ago
WOW!

Enjoyed the story so very much. Love your descriptions, characters and your humor. Some like it hot, it is! Please continue writing more stories like this.

adidasgaladidasgalover 10 years ago
10 stars

HOTTEST EVA !!!!! What a masterpiece...... Fiction or not, i am goin to make this story my new fantasy, Lol

SharonsGirlSharonsGirlover 10 years ago
What A Ride!

Wow, I thought "Morgan" was great, but this puts it to shame!

Looking at the story list it looks like we'll be seeing more of these characters.

I can't wait!

MGU67MGU67about 10 years ago
Just passing time

Always good to re read my favourite story while waiting for another one to come along. The way you write your stories make the characters live and breathe inside your readers too, Thank you for sharing them with us.

KarenEKarenEabout 10 years ago
Ver-r-ry Hot!

I'm still not sure I quite get the domme/sub thing, but the love these two have for each other completely overrides anything else.

Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
OH WOW! _I LOVED IT! _ WELL DONE!

"A Cougar Totally Turned" - Is a beautiful story!

Well written, it's just amazing!!!!

Thank You.

Gay Kat.

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 9 years ago
Because of stories like these...

AVixenLiterally is a "favorite" and in my list of Top 10 authors on literotica! After reading her stories, you feel like you know her characters and you may see yourself in a lot of them. This is the genius of her writing. I highly recommend reading all her works. I am in the process of doing that (again). I never tire of them. Ok, that's all and happy reading

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Favorite

Thank you, dear Vixxy. I reread this story. It has taken me some time. I love it just as much as the first time. Please continue writing, your words are powerful <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Oh My

Dear Sweet Vixy,

You my Dear have painted a true masterpiece. You had me from the very beginning all of the way trough this amazing love story. I have only been a Literotica reader for a few months but your writing style is by far my favorite. I read these stories for new ideas of ways to surprise MY HONEY of twenty eight years. My Karen is the Love of My Life and after reading your stories, I almost wish that I had been born a woman.....

Truly EROTIC, thank you and please don't stop.....

A True Fan

Randee1958Randee1958almost 8 years ago
Loved it😘

What a grand accomplishment in composing. Like you in relating yourself to the characters while writing your story. I as a reader became very fond of most of your characters in it. I'm happy to say that I'm going to rate each chapter 5🌟's.

Thank You for sharing your composition. Keep on writing.

Mymantoy999Mymantoy999almost 8 years ago
I was a little late to the party BUT I loved the story

even to the point that i did not even care if there was sex involved. I loved it for the story that it is. My Mistress/wife (I always call her Ma'am) and I have been together for 16 years. I was able to related to Julia on many levels (yes even if I am a guy).

The first time you "talked" to the "other person" in the mirror, I knew who you were talking to. It was easy for me to spot.

Dressing in the school girl outfit, and then given the "out", while it wasn't as a school girl, I was also dressed to embarrass, and also given an "out",, I also did not take it.

I cried the whole chapter when Sheri was stabbed. You wrote it so well, that I could feel your pain. Like Julia, I also hate hospitals, but I love the folks that work there (my older sister is a retired cardiac care nurse). So many people from my biological family and from my chosen Leather Family (some straight, most LGBT) have gone to the hospital and never came back out alive. Not in any way, the fault of those that worked so hard to save lives.

So basically, your story touched me on so many levels. Thank You!

Slave Ed

flyfishingfoolflyfishingfoolabout 7 years ago
LOVED THIS STORY

Kudos to you on a fabulous story and an amazing style in story telling. I was sad to find myself on the last page of the last chapter. You left me wanting more! Please keep writing

CourtneysSubCourtneysSubabout 6 years ago
Fantastic

Im truly speechless. Your characters are so believable,so detailed

The story itself is artistry and i absolutely love your little side remarks throughtout. Their humor gives even more life to this story that is full of ot already( by "it" i mean life not b.s. ) lol....well done indeed

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
TRULY AND UTTERLY GOBSMACKED!!

There are very few of the longer type stories that I can read in one "sitting", this one I couldn`t stop.

The descriptive nature of both erotic and day to day scenes were outstanding, and to be honest, although I scored each part with 5 stars, I genuinely did not want to leave any comment until I had read it all, which I promise you is only a testament as to how quickly I wanted to get to the next part.

The narrative with the "woman in the mirror" parts were amazingly inventive.

The part in the bath where both women discussed their feelings regarding the stabbing, was so emotionally charged, I genuinely suspect that, although you say it is a work of fiction, you may have indeed have suffered a "near miss" in the loss of a love at one time!!

An outstanding and memorable piece of work Vixen, thank you

alexwatson@aol.com

(tried to register, but cant get past the "type the numbers/letters in the box thingy")

bravebombadierbravebombadierover 5 years ago
Oh my!

Terrific, I read every chapter in one afternoon, kept wanting to save some for tomorrow but in the end, just had to keep reading.

One tiny crit, I agree with the comment re not liking the Lin and Kat dinner scene, it just didn't seem to sit right. Having said that, did I let it bother me? No!

A great read, a compelling story, so well written.

Bridget69Bridget69over 4 years ago
And so it ends...

or is it just beginning? Enjoyed this chapter from the tongue bath to the wedding. My only small gripe was the dinner party with Lin and Kat. Like her, it left me a bit turned off. But I understand it was done to show the honesty about the kind of relationship Sheri and Julia had, and to hell with anyone who didn't accept it.

ErinzeasyErinzeasyover 4 years ago
Beauiful story of love and devotion

Thank you for a wonderful D/s tale that is more love and devotion than punishment and pain. Our own story is so very much more one of our shared love and devotion to each other. There is occasional discipline in our relationship, true, but I only occurs when absolutely warranted and always with love and caring. We are eager to read more of your works (this was our first). As an aside, I found it interesting that your characters elicited a flood of shared emotions from erin, a testimony to your writing skills. Thank you for a very enjoyable story.

Mstrs K and e

Ravey19Ravey19over 3 years ago
Awesome and Brilliant Throughout

I wasn't too happy with the way Julia stayed dressed for dinner with Lin and Kat but Sheri was pushing her and then gave her an out which she refused. But all in all an extremely well written story. The style was a little quirky but I really loved it.

Moving on to your newer stories but a shame nothing new since 2016.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I liked the story over all. Well written. Loved the parts about Cindy both when she was a bitch at the conference and again at the end.

I didn't like two parts. One of how Niki got treated at the end. She was Sheri's sub and I just felt like she was treated rather shabbily. The other part I felt weird about was turning Julia out in a little kids dress complete w pacifier. I know she was given an out but the part I have difficulty with is the dinner party was for a co-worker who works for her. Think that would make things at work a bit difficult.

J

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