by PygmyCoho
I'm grateful that you at least left off with an idea of where the plot would have gone if you had decided to continue. I can see that you haven't submitted for a while, so I won't demand another chapter. But if you end up reading this: you are an imaginative and thoughtful writer. All of the characters were very strongly developed, and I was especially pleased with Stacy and how you introduced an Asian character without turning her into a fetish. It's rare to see that happen in any work of writing, let alone in porn. If just for that alone, I would love to see where this story was meant to go, but if it isn't in the cards, then I'm happy to settle for this as an "ending".
I really appreciate the comments. Life has gotten a little complex lately so writing has taken a back seat. But there are a couple of chapters more in the computer. Who knows? Maybe I'll be able to finish this.
Thank you.
PygmyCoho
There's an explicit masturbation scene on page one - hardly non-erotic.
I thought about what category to choose, and went for Non-Erotic because this installment has a bit less sex in it than other chapters of the story. I'd rather "undersell" it than disappoint readers who expected more action.
Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it very much.
PygmyCoho
You have set yourself up for a very fine follow-on series with Stacy & Hailey (and maybe one more Shelly & Barbara chapter?) . Hope you are able to successfully work through whatever has been going on in your life and gift us with more of your excellent writing...