by StoriesFromUK
How old are you? Your writing comes across like your a child/teenager. And if he was so mature for his age he should have thought about protection.
Well I make mistakes Mr perfect, as to age, just say around 50
What a stupid story. Obviously, a stupid story is written by a moron.
normally like a more drawn out story, this was still a very good first story. just my opinion as im not an author and have spent nearly 6 months just trying to start my own
Well I liked it. Lovely romance and, as someone who has had a go with an older woman, I feel I can vouch for how sexy they can be! I look forward to reading more from you, so please, keep up the good work!