All Comments on 'Mike and Sarah Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

How old are you? Your writing comes across like your a child/teenager. And if he was so mature for his age he should have thought about protection.

StoriesFromUKStoriesFromUKover 11 years agoAuthor
First story

Well I make mistakes Mr perfect, as to age, just say around 50

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Bullshit

What a stupid story. Obviously, a stupid story is written by a moron.

technowildytechnowildyalmost 11 years ago
i liked this story

normally like a more drawn out story, this was still a very good first story. just my opinion as im not an author and have spent nearly 6 months just trying to start my own

kjohns2001kjohns2001almost 11 years ago
Lovely romance

Well I liked it. Lovely romance and, as someone who has had a go with an older woman, I feel I can vouch for how sexy they can be! I look forward to reading more from you, so please, keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great story

Where's part 3?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Fantastic story. When are they getting married?

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