Cute? Not really sure you can describe zombie sex like that... but thats the vibe i got. Umm, grats?
Story was funny in a lot of parts, but the sarcasm sometimes came across as mean. Tone down the sarcasm about mom and boyfriend dying and it would have reminded me of Emma Stone's character in Easy A (snarky but likable).
When I stop laughing I may come back and give a more serious comment. That may be awhile though.
I forgot to thank AylahAyres for her editing help and honest feedback.
the comparisons between werewolf's, vampires and zombies.
Okay... the title alone got me to read this... and the story wasn't a disappointment I found myself laughing as I read. Sure the premise was silly but wasn't that what you were going for? For a Halloween themed story, it was very cute. Good luck in the contest.
Super hot and super funny! And also very relatable when you mention the ex boyfriend. We all have plenty of jerks like those who we wish would get eaten too. -.- lol This is a sure contest winner! Great stuff! :)
From "flashmob zombies" to "Oh my God! Zombies!" was my favorite part. This was hysterical. I loved it!
I wish this were categorized in Humor; it's a hoot to read! And BTW, come to Austin and you can check out (or enter!) actual "Air Sex" championships.
This is so funny, dear lord, i hope you win.
In the back of my head a part of me was going, ewww, but the rest of me was killing myself laughing! Loved it!
This is just hilarious. I laughed so much throughout the story. Hope you win. :D
Great story -- lots of laughs in this one!!
You judged the humour perfectly. Such a crazy idea! And yet the sex was still hot and it kinda got me going (does that make me weird?). Well done!
irregardless of the outcome...TK U MLJ LV NV
two thumbs up lol
I laughed several times. Shallow girl survives the Zombie Apocalypse; OMG's her way through a barren wasteland! I love it.
Oh my god, that was hilarious. That was really silly, campy and self-aware and I loved it. Good job.
Bizarre and really fucking funny!
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