All Comments on 'Kairi Ch. 03'

Job

Your going to have to explain why she just satisfied her self in the middle of her escape. That is just not very logical I don't care how much magic you have. Don't get me wrong I think you are doing a great job with the story. But it was just so out of no where that she starts to have sexual issues while running away. No rhyme no reason. I am looking for the explanation in the next chapter. Other wise keep up the good work. And love the way you hint at her male friends possibly being some kind of were animal as well.

just read the 3 chapters.. excellent light reading, left me with a growing interest how this story developes.. but as the chapters are so short i'd probibly do a catch up after you've submitted 4 or 5 chapters .. keep up the good work.

I like the plot and am curious why they took her. keep up the good work.

I completely agree with Ahzure on the random self pleas. Waiting to see how it goes from here

Can't wait to read more. Good so far!!!!!!!!

What are these weres up to? Their behavior has sinister implications. I hope she can get help from her co-workers from the bar. I got the impression that they are were of some kind.

I like this

I like where it seems to be going

Would love to see more

Well it has been over 7 months,and you said you had #4 in the works,,,i know you have had family issues,,but seems like this story has just been forgotten,,such a waste,,

why did you stop i was realy enjoying the story. i wish you had finished it.

Good story, can't wait for the next chapters.