All Comments on 'Bluff Ch. 05'

boout time we heard from you again. i was so hoping to see them finally get to the next stage and cant wait for more.

I know, I know, Redlion. I feel shame for my slack-assery. Unfortunately, I must disappoint you by saying this will, for the time being, close the book (so to speak) on Hank and Alex. There are other characters and other stories demanding attention and that is where I will be aiming my focus for a while. Hopefully, you'll enjoy those when they are ready. Cheers!

Sigh...Thank you. I was right to trust you. Thank you for an unforgettable reading experience, marvellous language, and laughter. Oh, and glorious sex. Not the easiest combo, but you pulled it off. Perfectly.

Bloody brilliant. I want more of Hank. You did such a great job with the perspective of Alex, leaving Hank still something of a mystery even at the end. Please write more!

You are a very good story teller and writer

Nice. I was smiling all the way.

Thank you

Just... wow

Delicious! Amazing and fun story! Didn't really care for the condom bit... Yeah, reality, but sucks some of the fun out, heh. Hell, if I had to bother with condoms I'd never cum!

I really kinda liked the shortish chapters, kinda bite sized reading, hehe, though prolly wasn't as fun for the folks reading them as they were being posted and having to wait for the next one, hehe.

Thanks for writing and sharing!!

Well, the story line was certainly refreshing. Sometimes, authors overdo the sensory impressions or get stuck in the blind thing. Yours hinted at a background without going into too much. anyway, thanks for the good read.

btw, I happen to be blind, so I have quite a bit of understanding of other sensory inputs. anyway, if you have some questions, drop me a line. :)

Wish there were another five chapters, I'd love to learn more about their lives together. You know you did well when they clamor for more ;)

J

I loved the way the author introduced the principles of the story. Just like a really good stripper slowly reveals her charms by building your anticipation before removing the next piece of clothing the author reveals the physical appearance and also the mental makeup of the characters. Bluff is a short 5 chapter story that is short but sweet. Wish the author would have more of her work available for us to enjoy. Bravo!