All Comments on 'Finishing School for Shemales Ch. 03'

Brilliant series thank you..Hypnotic ...

i'll try not to leave it so long between stories in future

x imo

I love this story and this chapter was very good. What I do not understand is that the Cabal must know about the Mistress K and her Finishing School for Shemales. That she is powerful and has very important, powerful and rich friends. That you do not want to make her mad at you and have her as an enemy. They must know that she will not accept her property being stolen from her and will exact retribution. The first to be killed will be Davina's step-father and then destroy the Cabal's fortress and release the captive shemales. I think that you are starting to show that the Mistress K has fallen in love with Davina will let no one hurt her nor sell her to anyone. What will Davina role be in the school and with Mistress K will need to be shown in future chapters.

Glad to see chapter 3. I've been wondering what happened to Davina and her friends. This is an excellent series. It is erotic and well written. Unlike a lot of the stories on Literotica, these stories have character develpment and a plot. I hope chapter 4 doesn't take as long. But, I will wait patiently because I know good fiction takes time to write.

A bit brutal, but a great chapter on a good story line. I'm looking forward to the cavalries arrival.

Glad too see that you're back in the saddle, so to speak ;)

This really was boss

great ending the next chapter will be great

Fantastic series! I couldn't stop reading! I look forward to future chapters :)

i would love to see another chapter or two for this story, i love it

Must see more of this please.

Loved every word in all three chapters, if I wasn't hard I was leaking!! Can't tell you how many times I came!!! You have got to get davina and mistress back together. Maybe send in seal team six, or delta, or maybe the SAS!! Lol. You have to bring them back and have a massive orgy with lots of cum and great tenderness !! All three were 5 out of 5

Apart from the bad ending it was a lovely story

please continue writing this piece,

I enjoyed reading these 3 chapters very much

Please can continue so I can find out what happens to Mistress K.

What will happen with Mistress k and Davina

If you don't get darling Davina and Olivia back safe and sound to the School, forget Mistress K, the readers on this site will hunt you down and kill you. This is an awesome story!

This chapter was so hard to read. It was just cold and nightmarish. Please dont leave those Little flowers in that hell. PLEASE!!

Davina is a great character and her transformation has been wonderful. Dont let her stay in that awful place.

I would love to be in the girls predicament! Make me a slut! :)

Any idea when PArt 4 is due out

I wish .. this had happened to me.. it is so same thing i dream of.. instead of davina.. i wud hav given name soniya.. an indian shy gurl felt into dirt.. giggles.. Please let this happen to me

Looking forward to ch 4 this is been realy grate read so .THE ups and dwones of it and the from a shy boy to this realy grate shemale.Its alote pls more soon yours leann5red xxx

A great story. I hope to read more soon. It is so intense.

I absolutely love this story; you're such a talented writer.

Nice Kill Bill reference? Will she be like Uma Thurman's character from the movie and she does not like to be messed with at all. Pete just can't let it go let it go (That song has been in my head) and btw did the Kabal make Pete their bitch yet or is Petey Mistress K's bitch in name only because he was responsible for kidnapping Davina and Olivia to be in this mess in the first place? Pete should be in that school, but does not deserve a girl's name at all or be one at all the school should be his jail cell instead to be the subs in the school's bitch.

I'm so sorry I was only able to rate this story a 5 it's the highest they have it is however truly a 15 at least the best most erotic story I've ever read I think I had to orgasmat leaset once per page playing with my nipples only i.ve never been so turned on I may have to go out and find myself a couple of cocks to do me

please don't stop there - come on ~~~ tell us about how Mistress K goes about saving her girl????

It 'a great story congratulations for your fantasy.

I hope that the full because they are curious to know how Mistress K free girls face and pay to the father of Davina.

I found this story last year and was hoping I'd be lucky enough to find a new chapter today :-( I highly encourage you to keep it up!!

Extremely looking forward to the conclusion, I shall keep checking.

Thank you for writing this masterpiece.

Looking forward to reading what happens next. Keep it going.

Please please please add another chapter!!

Please write some more chapters. It's a great story.

Great story. Would love to find out what happens.

A superb story, so exciting

This highly absorbing story has apparently been abandoned. It most definitely does not deserve to be cast aside. Ch. 04 is many years overdue. Please please finish the story.

I am in agreement there needs to be a ch4. You are a very personal writer and i have become very personal with all your characters. I have entered myself into this "your" story but now I feel empty

I am looking forward to a true climax!

Where is chapter 4?! We need some closurel

With chapter 1 submitted in May of 2011, and chap 2 in Oct of 2011, then finally came chap 3 in April of 2013, then nothing more,.. any further story from this author seems unlikely. Too bad, I really wanted Mistress K to cum to the rescue!

...for Mistress K and the cavalry to come riding over the hill to rescue Davina and Olivia from the clutches of the evil cabal (is that redundant?), this is still one of the best stories I have ever read in this genre.

And I think that the way this ended we can fill in the blanks. We know Mistress K will never rest until she gets her property back and I believe we are left with the thought that she will be successful regardless of how powerful the cabal might be.

So, on the whole, it was a satisfying conclusion especially considering that the last entry in this series was seven years ago as of this reply.

Happy to give it five stars.

I absolutely loved this story, all 3 chapters, so far. Magnificently written and in such a hot & lustful way too - you are such a talented writer... Had me either lusting, being hard or dripping my juicy nectar of precum almost the entire story. You really do have a great gift, Gurl! Please, please keep using that gift, for the sake of all of us of this genre. Kiss, kiss Imogen...

great story...if it would have been finished!!!! too bad! makes it not so good! where is chapters 4 thru at least 10. more chapthers or a sequel is needed, but being its been 10 years i would say its not going to happen. makes a great story not so good