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All Comments on 'The Lost Lord Ch. 20'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
sweet

Looking foreword to more. Love

This story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
So good

Keep it up, I'm addicted :-D

DarkPulseDarkPulsealmost 11 years ago
Rather unnecessary use of [this]

Do away with naming things using [this]. it's distracting. Other than that, good stuff

SyrustheVirusSyrustheVirusalmost 11 years ago

Great Chapter yet again.... I can not wait to see where you take everything. The whole premise on seems to get better and better.

J0SEJ0SEalmost 11 years ago

I want to punch Arazra in the face.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
when will the next

How long till another one comes out

AdonisXxXAdonisXxXalmost 9 years ago
riiiiiiight

that last part there was veeeeery unrealistic, yeah shit is sci-fi, but really? hah-uh man that's like "eye-rolling" material

Muadib89Muadib89over 8 years ago

Ya you realy fucked up with that world card scene. Don`t know but as it nears the end the story gets really bad.

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