I enjoy your stories even when they are stories that aren't stories. I guess it is because we are of the same age. You are having fun and it is fun to read about.
These two make me jealous with their shenanigans.
lot of good solid fun. keep it up!!!
you do make sex fun!!!
Great to see dialogue that is actually readable, not all mushed up into an unintelligible ball so that the reader has no idea who is saying what. Fun story too.
Funny, readable enjoyable, just about all we need, thanks for a good read, well appreciated by a 70 something reader.
To those who enjoy my poor efforts, it's all just for fun anyway. A special thanks to those who took the time to email, that is always appreciated.
MGM, i have enjoyed many of your tales. But I couldnt get through the first half of this one. I'll admit that the septuagenarian angle is a turnoff for me, but my complaint is more on the prerequisites for the story. It assumes that we have read about your old fart escapades. That's fine for a story to your fan base, but I expect a little diversion for a contest piece. Who on earth wants to go back and read 2-3 stories just to enjoy a contest submission--no one.
I admit I gave up early, but the comments tell me I didn't miss much.
Great short story by a master storyteller. It may not win but it sure was a fun read. Your tales always come across like a conversation at the local pub over a beer. Thanks for writing.
Funny little story. Not my usual category,but it was pretty interesting. Once I started reading I couldn't help but chuckle a little. I gave it 5 stars.
with this boring couple ...just a big turn off and not exciting or interesting at all.....need to change the characters and go in a different direction....
You are the best writer here. A tale down the pub or a laugh shared with a partner. You are my favourite writer mate.
too bad you did submit it.
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