All Comments on 'Let Me See'

but not very realistic

And who deduced whom?

Wasn't very believeable.

Not so good. Not only was it unrealistic but you lack basic knowledge about human anatomy. The story & dialogue was stiff & didn't flow. It made for a very awkward read. 1*

I fall in line here as well. There are some grammar and fluidity issues. But mainly, I find it hard that two college girls seemed so clueless about sexual mechanics.

But i did anyway . I gave you a 5 . Maybe if you have another chapter on this story you could explain that the girls were really nervous because they knew from the start that they were about to seduce the boy and was acting like they were because of this . If not .those 2 have to be some of the dumbest college kids i have ever read about .

You started a good story that must be finished with more chapters. Thanks

It's nice to get a humorous tale once in awhile, and this was definitely funny. Also sexy.

you cum in a pussy blo

Lucky sod, nothing like this sex ed in my days at school.