by Atgod
I thought this was a good story, but there were some big spelling and grammars errors that you needed to fix. The editors don't really correct anything, so it's up to you to make sure of that. Love the ending especially! Keep it up!
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lol jk. wierd but idk people are in to different thinks. do ya own thing, stay real my friend
I loved this story. Well done to the author. Got to go now to take care of something......
This showed a lot of imagination and was well organized. I loved your description of the feet, and the way they played with those cocks. Such a turn on. This is one of my fetishes. And I loved the footjob foursome at the end. Thanks for writing. I'm looking forward to your other stuff!
Your story line is good. It moves along nicely and creates some very sexy images.
Your grammar and spelling, however, are horrendous.
What a great story about her feet and very nice to read even tho no tickling was involved.