All Comments on 'Karen's Feet'

by Atgod

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
u get an A+

very good

sexualrelief7191sexualrelief7191over 10 years ago
Cool idea, needs more editing

I thought this was a good story, but there were some big spelling and grammars errors that you needed to fix. The editors don't really correct anything, so it's up to you to make sure of that. Love the ending especially! Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
SOSOSOSOSOSOSOOSOS

THIS WAS VERY SOSOSOSOOSOS Y

MOAR MOAR

lol jk. wierd but idk people are in to different thinks. do ya own thing, stay real my friend

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Superb

I loved this story. Well done to the author. Got to go now to take care of something......

ImaginaryLover70ImaginaryLover70over 10 years ago
I Loved This Story!!!

This showed a lot of imagination and was well organized. I loved your description of the feet, and the way they played with those cocks. Such a turn on. This is one of my fetishes. And I loved the footjob foursome at the end. Thanks for writing. I'm looking forward to your other stuff!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Writing Skills Need Improvement

Your story line is good. It moves along nicely and creates some very sexy images.

Your grammar and spelling, however, are horrendous.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Foot story

What a great story about her feet and very nice to read even tho no tickling was involved.

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I will only write weirder or fetish based material. Like blowjobs/footjob obsession , magical or scifi modifications, breast expansion, body modification, mind break. That sort of thing.