All Comments on 'My Time with Tracy Ch. 03'

by Firsttimeguy

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Most revealing character trait about your lead character. Total complete asshole.

"Three years later, I was two states over visiting my sister. I had to swing by the local mall since I forgot to get her kid a birthday gift." "Her kid" is his nephew. Hope you meant to illustrate, this pathetic slime has no soul. And Frank will deserve Tracy fucking around with the next Dom that she succumbs to, someday. Sooner or later. "You knew I had this weakness; I warned you," she will tell him. Dumb and dumber.

silentsoundsilentsoundover 6 years ago
Weird fun

I liked it.

WargamerWargameralmost 4 years ago

What a shame I hoped he would take her on and own her ass forever.

She deserved that, what an asshole he was.

WargamerWargameralmost 3 years ago

Regraded this shitty story as well to 1/5.

I must say that I’m glad this author stopped writing here his tales were quite shitty, absolute drivel.

He went back to his day job l hope, no money to be had here.

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