All Comments on 'Only For One Night Ch. 02'

So happy to see an update to this story! Keep them coming!

This gem is perfectly written and I lucked up on it and couldn't stop reading. You have to love the female bc she has had some hard knocks that lead right back to her cheating, deadbeat husband. Her mom and daughters know she deserve happiness and I can't wait till they meet Thomas--sexy man. Apparently Thomas's secretary is happy for him.

Five.

Thomas need to stop playing like he isn't in love with Naomi.

They definitely need to discuss their "just sex" relationship before somebody gets hurt.

I hope there is more to this story. This is HOT HOT HOT!!!! Muy caliente!!!

This was soooo HHHOOOTTTTTT !!!!!

That was verrrrrrrrryyyyyyyy good!!!! There need to be more chapters

I love how you quietly after 2 or 3 yrs you slip a new chapter in. I would of love an explanation Miss but thanks though

Again wow

Wow! More sooner rather than later please, but all in the same, wow.

Great update, the character development is well done for your female lead, hopefully we will get inside the male's head soon. Thank you.

You have an excellent start and I know you haven't found an editor so if you would like one I would be happy to edit it for you.

Koollava

I am loving the character development of these two characters. I hope he next installment, if there is another, doesn't take as long as this one did. =)

Aaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! I'm so glad that you're back to posting I love this story an cant wait for the next chapter. . Also i just wanted to know id your going to finish your other story 'The space between things' I really like that story and am curious about what's going to happen Regan and her new family?

You have a way of putting your words together that makes your story and your characters so lifelike and believable...you are AWESOME, again I give you 5 stars!

I am completely hooked. I'm enjoying the emotion between the charachters. I can't wait for the next chapter. You have a new fan.

Holy hell, this is awesome!! Please update soon!! I'm so feeling this story, I'm actually seeing a white guy as I get thru my divorce, he's been comforting, loving and supportive. Did I mentioned he's awesome in bed!! He's 7 years older than I am, but we work. As I read this, I saw myself in Naomi, wanting to make a marriage work, not only to save face, but for the sake of my family. My "white knight" allowed me to move on, to be stronger. Okay, I'm just going on and on, lol... but I can relate to this story!! Love it!!

I really hope that you continue with this story, it's so good and I love Naomi and Thomas what a couple, I hope!

When is the next chapter coming??? So good!!!

Please don't leave us waiting for the next chapter too long. I love this story. I'm rooting for them!

I enjoyed the beginning. Naomi needed some Thomas. I can't wait for the ending. Maybe epilogue with Thomas Jr. Lol.

I really like the quality you put into your writing, I have a feeling you do it professionally. I'll be hoping to see your name in a bookstore one day and read a novel of yours :)

I am enjoying the story and character development.

this story is just what i was looking for!!!

I keep coming back to this story hoping for more...

It's very rare that I read a story and literally feel tingles. Please continue with this series! Your writing is impeccable!

I'm loving this. Please continue this story.

Love all the description!

and so far I given each five stars (I'd give 10 to many if it were possible). This is another erotic romance that I am hoping you will continue. You make your characters come alive for me... I feel their aches, pain, joys, happiness and yes their passion. Please let us hear more about Thomas and Naomi!!!

Please write more of this story. It was so good.

This two part series brought out the raw emotion of what it means to be wanted, desired and craved when situations of life happens. A thirst for intimacy and taking the body to unforseen imagined sensitivities inspite of recognizing the reality of the actual relationship leaves me as an avid reader wondering what happens to the characters now???

Your readers want more too. One night is definitely not enough! 👏😄

..did i just fall in love with a character

.....where is the rest??

Wow you leave us wanting more!

This can't be it we need more chapters

Your passion for words towards me to the conclusion that I am craving for more * puts down iPad to go take a cold shower *

Not only are your characters hot, they are likable as well. And that only adds to the story.

I cannot wait to find out what's going to happen with the account of Bryant and how it's going to affect Thomas & Naomi's relationship.

Oh boy this story is hot, full passion btwn Naomi and Thomas. So ready for more of Thomas, and his hotness in & out of bed. Pleasssse...

This is fantastic. The title "Only for One Night" is great but one night is not nearly enough. I like Thomas and Naomi but I can't stand that Bryant. He need to get his come uppance because he treated Naomi like yesterday's trash. She deserve Thomas and he deserves her. I can hardly wait for the conclusion. Five stars

Excellent story. Very well written and realistic. Hopefully additional chapters will be added; just can't stop at this point. Liked the way the characters were developed.

Reggie,

Magnificent story of human emotional interaction. You captured the evolving needs of all characters. She seemed to hold hope for her marriage even though it was dead

Thomas knew the score but wanted to enjoy her to the fullest. There is a feeling of hope despite the gloom conclusion that it was just sex. Your writing is in a class of its own.

Where is part three? I'm in love with the story, and I'm in love with Thomas and Naomi. Gloria is a lot like my mom, in a way. I want to bitch slap Bryant. I freakin' hate him! So... when will we be treated again?

if that is your photo in bio, nothing average about it. slap hapy papy#9

Great story. Needs a part 3! Please :)

Pleeeasssssse continue this story!!!!

Naomi wanted more, so do I.

Ugh I need this to be continued! Loved this so much, you're such a gifted writer

Too short. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Girl stop playing with my emotions lol where’s the rest of this story?

Please it can't end there, this is only the beginning, I DEMANED more! still I can't give it less than 5*

You write some REALLY HOT stories!!! Almost made me cum in my pants ;-) I hope life is treating you well.