All Comments on 'Ask Not And Ye Shall Receive!'

by ForkedBeard

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FA_JFFA_JFabout 10 years ago

Well written. Once the payback was determined, it was logically developed. However, it was very obvious that was a guy's wishful thinking of female payback. Violation of trust like that would invite a Louisville Slugger massage, with meat fork sensory checks. :D:D:D. Don't think I would give him all the pussy he could handle as a punishment. But maybe that's just me...Whatcha think ladies? ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
What a joke! And not a good one.

His violation of her trust would have gotten him booted, not sexed up by a group of women. And bringing in all those women would have violated his trust regardless of some men thinking that sex with a group of women would be fun. So their relationship is history. Idiotic, unbelievable storyline. Bad execution. Worse dialogue. Just plain awful.

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