All Comments on 'Busted Bankster'

Your stories have become simple in the extreme: Succubus meets person, fucks them, kills them. Every time. No one survives, no one has a chance. No one resists.

In a word? Boring.

Well-written literature. Fuck the anonymous critics.

Yes it's well written, however the anonymous critic has a point.

Au contraire....i found the long ones boring..

this is good..sweet short and erotic....i just prefer the men to be more arrogant, stronger and braver...succubus vs slayer is a perfect example....more of those arrogant strong muscular men vs succubus please.,..Short erotic power packed punches.

This was a very weak story. It had no intrigue,no spark to hold my intrest. The man was just some guy trying to get ahead by hard work. He was niether pious or evil in his pursuit of money.

You're one of my favorites but it's like you weren't even tyring to write to your normal level. I almost didn't finish reading the tale.

I wish he would have struggled more, but it still was fun.

I like when the succubus takes her victims.

personally i like these shorter ones more and yeah slayer vs succubus is the best of this kind

keep it up hydra :D

As always, I very much enjoy new stories from you although I agree that this is not your best..

They criticise your work, saying its not your best. But this tale fits right here with the rest: A master at work, free of contest. 10/10 please write us some more.

"He'd dismissed them as the rabid frothing of people too lazy to move their fat asses out from behind their keyboards and do something constructive with their lives." - assumes everyone who is less fortunate are lazy.

"The police would baton-charge this scum back into the slime where they belonged." - Nice

"He was one of the elite, the one percent. This skank with big hooters was in no way his equal." - disrespectful attitude toward those not gifted with status.

"This couldn't be happening. Not to him. He was someone. He was important. He earned seven figures a year." - still thinks his money makes him better.

Anonymous says he isn't pious? Personally I liked seeing this dicks world getting rocked by a succubus. I call this a happy ending.