by writemarksmith
I can't wait for Chapter 2...excellent character development...keep up the great work.
I'm totally wet now, and I have to get to work. Thanks a lot! ;)
Great story! I enjoyed that it was realistic and how the auctioned built throughout the story. Thanks for your work on this.
Great start to what I hope is a continued series! I would have loved it if the main character was a married woman, but regardless very good story! I continually imagined my wife in this situation, which gave me a nice hard-on!
ive read another series like this recently and i freely admit to it being one of my fantasies. right at the end when phil said he needed her to bend over and bare her ass, well lets just its quite slow typing one handed right now ;)
Well what can i say i looked forward to Jenny the intern continue and you did something new...and once again i readed like mesmerised you have such skill in writing such magnificent office stories...slowly....smart....way to wraping around finger to submission its absolutley...my style this kind of stories i want to read i hope some day you will make some story with two females mayby some boss lady slowly....smart manipulated by some new girl..much much lower then her on start it would be my dream read that kind of story in inteligent style as yours.
You are great and i wishh you luck and talent in future Sir
greetings Paulina
There are young women out there just like her. That's how I met my second wife. She became attracted to my demeanor and as she was 15 years younger then me she was to good to pass up.
like the way you build up, one leading to another. would have loved to read some more detailed description of the girls body features