All Comments on 'How I Became the Office Slut Ch. 01'

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PamR55PamR55about 10 years ago
One of the best

I can't wait for Chapter 2...excellent character development...keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Very sexy

I'm totally wet now, and I have to get to work. Thanks a lot! ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wow.

Thank you. More please.

DoradoDoradoabout 10 years ago
Believable

Great story! I enjoyed that it was realistic and how the auctioned built throughout the story. Thanks for your work on this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Excellent!

Great start to what I hope is a continued series! I would have loved it if the main character was a married woman, but regardless very good story! I continually imagined my wife in this situation, which gave me a nice hard-on!

sopharoonessopharoonesabout 10 years ago
love a good office fantasy

ive read another series like this recently and i freely admit to it being one of my fantasies. right at the end when phil said he needed her to bend over and bare her ass, well lets just its quite slow typing one handed right now ;)

sopharoonessopharoonesabout 10 years ago
oh! you were the writer of other series i read like this!

nice

HypnoslavepaulaHypnoslavepaulaabout 10 years ago

Well what can i say i looked forward to Jenny the intern continue and you did something new...and once again i readed like mesmerised you have such skill in writing such magnificent office stories...slowly....smart....way to wraping around finger to submission its absolutley...my style this kind of stories i want to read i hope some day you will make some story with two females mayby some boss lady slowly....smart manipulated by some new girl..much much lower then her on start it would be my dream read that kind of story in inteligent style as yours.

You are great and i wishh you luck and talent in future Sir

greetings Paulina

pedapandupedapandualmost 10 years ago
Hot n erotic

Hot n erotic....

HogwashHogwashalmost 9 years ago
Great start!

Looking forward to reading the rest of the series right now!

liz33ndliz33ndover 8 years ago
awesome story

Very seductive and erotic. Great writing skill.

1954hall1954hallalmost 8 years ago
Young women

There are young women out there just like her. That's how I met my second wife. She became attracted to my demeanor and as she was 15 years younger then me she was to good to pass up.

rolandskyrolandskyover 5 years ago
nice build up

like the way you build up, one leading to another. would have loved to read some more detailed description of the girls body features

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

love it... such a wonderful read...

lillyjones1402lillyjones1402over 4 years ago
Amazing

One of the best stories here

KristaMoraneKristaMoraneover 2 years ago

Great story * * * * *

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