All Comments on 'It Didn't Work Out Ch. 04'

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wibitriwibitriabout 10 years ago
Definitely worthwhile series

I can't believe this will only last 12 chapters!

why_not_jillwhy_not_jillalmost 10 years ago
The day to day stuff

Wow, wow, wow!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Really good writing. Unnerving

I feel like I am strapped to a guillotine and waiting for the blade to fall.

jenorma2012jenorma2012about 8 years ago
get real

I am done reading these parts, I am going to spik to the last one and see if it is good or not

stealthwaspstealthwaspalmost 8 years ago
Don is so pressed

I'm hoping that there is more to Don than we know at the moment. He didn't have to agree to all of those rules and he still has power in his situation. He needs to calm down.

ScarelttScarelttabout 4 years ago
What a let down..

Good job Don, he let himself and his wife down.. the chapter was wonderful!

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