by Loverofwolves
Another great chapter. I'm really enjoying this story, it is one of the best on here. Just hope we don't have to wait as long for the next chapter. :)
I have been keeping your story bookmarked just waiting for the next chapter!!! Hurry plz
Please continue the story, what happens next?
(Just in case you were wondering you can double, triple, or even quadruple the present size of the story and I would not complain ;-) )
Since it's taking so long to update, can we get an update and conclusion. This is a great story, but if you take over 6 months to update, a conclusion should be given. Its not fair to readers to make them wait that long. By the way, you are a very talented writer. Enjoyed this thus far...
Are we going to get the next part or maybe a conclusion? This is such a great story I want to know what happens!
Please! please! please! Write the next chapter! I've reread these chapters how many times and its just as good as the first time!! I'm dying here!! I want to know what happens next!!
You are good at evoking emotional responses. I was shedding a few tears throughout your story. I feel for Anya. If you can overcome your grammatical and word choice errors which can be done with a good editor that is not afraid to explain your errors (e.g. a teacher) you have a future in writing if you continue to practice. There is a mantra that you need 10,000 hours to become great at something. You have that potential.
You also need to ease up on the slang when not using dialog and your P.O.V.'s thought processes. Hope you continue the story. Remember, 10,000 hours.
Please have more! I would love to see where this continues to!
Great story; I love the characters and really would like to see where they go next. Please don't keep us waiting any longer and update soon.
Love this storyline. I am looking forward to the next installment... Thank you...
Love this series! Can't wait for more!! Probably one of the best online stories I've read:)
Just stumbled onto to this and love it!! Hopefully you update soon though seeing how it's been more then 8 months will check back now and then.. Shame great story ,great potential. .
It’s been a long time, but if you ever decide to write new chapters for this story, I’d be more than happy to pick back up as editor. I promise my editing game has improved over the last four years or so. I do really love this storyline.
This is a really good read and i hope you decide to finish this. I'd love to see what happens next.