All Comments on 'A Moment in Time'

Always love your stuff. While I take this as fiction, I can almost remember you telling me this some time ago while we had coffee in the family room.

No, we never met, it was just that real.

Thank you for commenting and letting me know we didn't meet. Part of the story is true. I did sneak in and kiss my sisters girlfriend and never told anyone. A lot of the rest of the story is true also. Thanks for taking the time to comment.

DG

It almost pushed me out of the I want to curl up and die club.

Yes. Your story prompted me to sit down and think about past moments in time. And about people I knew and loved and who are now gone. Thank you for reviving pleasant memories.

I cannot wait to hear where you take the motorhome, how things go with you and Jill and all the places you are going to go. Great story as always!

Did 'you' have more than one older sister, and they shared a single husband?

If it was AN older sister then it should have been -

"They were two lifelong friends of my older sister's, whose husband passed away." showing possession by the older sister, rather than plurality of sister!

Or was it the husband of the two lifelong friends who passed away?

Good tale, as always. However, the next time you and your editor (Linda 2953) get together and reread the sentence beginning "I told my kids about Jill and I ...," you might want to consult any basic English grammar book about the object of a preposition. What if "Jill and..." were not in the phrase? Would you write "I told my kids about I ..."? You're too good a writer for such things, so check it out.

Like I said, a lovely story, but I would not expect anything less from you.

I read most of your stories on LIT and am looking forward to a lot more.

Thank you.

just putting in two cents worth. This story is inspiring in ways, for some of the readers, myself anyway. My history doesn't include anything so special as this episode, mine's just mundane history. Some of the forethought of this story's main character are even missing for me. Probably have to work the rest of life just to obtain necessities, and be most thankful for even having work at this life stage. It would be a great dream to keep focused on though, someone to share life's little pleasures with. Don't get me wrong, pets are nice to a point, still something is missing at another level.

Thanks for sharing this story, these are the ones that make this place worth visiting.

Entertaining and heart warming. I can just see the two of them plowing around the country in a big old Winnebago. Maybe you could add a chapter about their adventures? Should make for interesting tales.

This story brought a tear to my eye, as I recalled a few moments of my life. So many roads left to travel. I'm very grateful to you story-tellers, even if you upset some grammar Nazi's. The beauty is in the message, not the punctuation. This is a free site, so enjoy what they write, and offer constructive critisism. Maybe they will write more free stories.

I'm at that age, and every day is special! Thank you for that!

I am the same age as jerry i see her on fb and i remember those moments in time

Are we going to be treated to traveling stories?? lol Thanks for sharing.

A good one. My wife (of 48 years) and I have just bought our motorhome. Can hardly wait to go. Thank you DG

You took us somewhere that many of us might be going one day. I really have enjoyed reading it.

As you are no doubt aware by now, I very rarely comment on other folks yarns; I really don’t feel that I’m qualified.

However, if I may, I will hazard a reply comment to the idiot who complained about Grammar.

This is a first person dialogue, mate! i.e. effectively the narrator of the tale is talking to the reader and very few people have/use perfect grammar in their everyday speech. I very much suspect that whomever it is hiding behind that “anonymous” moniker, is either another author jealous because he didn’t create this charming little tale himself; or it is someone incapable of any memorable creative writing whatsoever! DC

DGH, sorry mate; but there comes a time!

DG, Once again you show us that you don't need full blown sexual descriptions to write a romance story. A great job and a reminder to us all that we all have those moments in time.

This was not only a fun story to read it also lets all of us have a moment in time. Thank you for good read.

but Thank God there are enough rainbows to come around, TK U MLJ LV NV

Extremely few authors tackle Senior romance or the problems Seniors face after the death of a life long spouse. Thank you for this story.

Very nice story, and totally believable. While it may or may not be a "true" story, it definitely does not require any imagination stretching to see it as real. Thank you

Great little tale. That moment in time turned out to be a future.

Excellent

I have read most of your stories. This was excellent. I know many come here to read erotica, but I prefer the type I just read. I have you listed as a favorite author.. More please.

VERY GOOD STORY ABOUT TIME A REAL LIFE STORY NOT ONR OF THE BULL SHIT STORIES YOU READ ON LITEROTICA ABOUT TIME THANKS .

This was special. Love isn’t reserved for the young. Loved this.

lost my wife in 3/31/2011 still miss her & talk to her. know that this is just a story . still wear my wedding ring. she like to travel but i didn't & to this day I regret that .long before we were married i drove long distanace over the rode from ocean to ocean & the gulf to the Canadian border

I drove east to west & north to south. my late wife love to travel but I didn't . after she passed at the young age of 67 I deeply regret it .would give anything if I could go back & do over .

is the controlers of this site going far left with the idiot democruds

Flarebel, be careful when chucking rocks when your white house is full of glass windows !

This story takes back to when I was 14 and my 18 year old sister had a party. I had a crush on one of her friends. At that party I danced with this friend numerous times. Really brings back memories. I liked this story.

Your tale brought back many memories, I really enjoyed it.

It's pretty sad to see negative comments, particularly from any anonymous readers.

Awww....

you can't beat a happy ending .....

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 ...

I had read some of your stories a few years ago, now rediscovering them. Not sure if your still out there but I hope so - even if you don't post more. Getting older, this is easy to relate to, thank you for the story!

Been reading your stories and I’ve been enjoying them quite a bit I haven’t looked at the time frames I still hope you’re right

It was ok, not particularly exciting or surprising, but a nice tale about normal people doing their best after becoming widowed.

What I thought was stupid was the list of similar stories. I have read all of them and none are anything at all like this story!

A good story doesn't need gymnastic sex or cheating spouses. In this case two people have a chance at a new 'moment in time'. Thank you for your tale!

somewhere east of Omaha

GREAT !

THANK YOU !

LIked it - especially the feelgood factor

You really are a good writer and storyteller. This was a lovely story. 5 stars

Another enjoyable, well written story with a positive uplifting result. 5*

A really sweet everyday story about two lonely people.

I like that, thanks

Waiting for the next chapter in their lives.

A month between home visits is too short. My wife and I traveled for 2 months before we went home. 🏠

Halcyon days.

Bill S.