All Comments on 'A Dragon's Slave Ch. 03'

Needs to be longer....still good

It felt somewhat short, and though the introduction of an existential conflict is important, it felt somewhat rushed. Though this is a minor tarnish, something that could easily be washed away if the quality of the story is at least somewhere near the quality of the last two chapters. Not bad work thus far.

It's been a while but I loved it

loved it

I'm getting more and more impressed as the story moves on. I hope this story goes for a very long time.

Why'd you make her bald?! =[