by imbu23201
I don't know why no one else is saying this: awesome really really awesome. I know how important our appreciation is to keep writers going so let me be the first to say please keep going! And thank you for your story so far.
This is getting good. No worries about the wait due to med school. I'll be joining you shortly :)
Maybe Shane could demand some new laws to be passed against the abuse towards humans perpetrated by vampires if she acquiesces to their request she help.... (I'm assuming in this vampire world that it happens and is accepted)
Am I the only one that actually finds Ashlyn and Raoul hotter than the main storyline? More A&R scenes!
I too can't understand why you don't get a lot of comments, for the amount of work and effort you put into this story. I think this is brilliant and cannot wait for chapter 8. So please, carry on and never stop. :)
This story really is a FANTASTIC find in the non-human section! Looking forward to chapter 8.
you appear to be crafting an interesting tale with romance as well. some how I can't help but like the vamp and the wolf relationship, I feel bad for the vamp cause it appears her story may be a sad one as well. too bad there isn't some way to bring them together and not have this turn out bad for them. lol.
I'm so happy that you've come back to finish this story. I was so disappointed that it suddenly stopped so long ago, but I also understand that life is not predictable and so your studies and everything else had to take primary importance. Am waiting with patient but baited breath for your wonderful work to be completed. I also like your different view on the whole supernatural aspect of vamps & weres. The fabulous story you are weaving with the unexpected twists and turns regarding the interactions between both races is enchanting and refreshing from the usual stories. Keep up the great work!!!
Where is the rest of the story? I'm still reading, so you're supposed to be writing. I want more!
I promise I'm still working on this. Life is hectic but I'm hoping to get a few more chapters done this summer. Don't give up on me yet.
Your take on vampires is a little different than the standard approach, which is a good thing. I can see how you got the concept of "anchors," although I think the magical connection is taking things a little far.
I've enjoyed reading your story and would like to see it finished. Good job so far.
I've just discovered your stories and love them all! Please continue :) I'm a copy editor if you're still looking for one!
I'm still writing whenever I can. Right now I'm focusing on A Tale of Revenge. Apparently the stress of med school has taken my imagination to darker places. I still love this story and will come back to it. @anonymous I would love a copy editor but I have no way of getting in touch with you! Send me an email!! Thanks!!
What happened? Where are you? I was really enjoying this series and can't believe it's not finished!
Anyhow onto the critique. This series is imaginative, very well written and credible even within a supernatural genre that feels familiar but also has new slants on an old story.
Very good, shame there's no conclusion!
I hope you aren't going to make it a storybwhere the wolves are beaten down. Your plot line paints them as the underdogs who were abused for generations- as does it the vampire who is helping them. Its a great story so far but i hope it isnt a all or nothing battle royale
Hi everyone! Thank you for reading this story! I realize I've announced this in other places but not on this page and I'm sorry to say I've stopped writing this story for now. I tried but it's not speaking to me anymore. I'm hoping that eventually I'll be able to circle back but for the foreseeable future I will be working on other projects. Again, I'm sorry for leaving this hanging. I know how frustrating it is when you are into a story and there is no closure. No one is sadder than I am that I can't make it work.
I only found this story a few days ago and although i knew it was unfinished I couldn't help but read it...!
It is a bloody brilliant story and I really hope you find the wherewithal to finish it someday....
I think this might be a problem that some writers have where they have the story starting all guns blazing, but they don't have any idea planned for the conclusion.
Please please please finish this story. I know you say it's not speaking to you any more but can you try again anyway. Your stories are some of the best on this site and this is one of your better ones. It would be a real Shame to leave it unfinished
I just started reading this story, but I didn't find out until the last available chapter that it's not complete. 😫 Please finish this if you can! It's so good!
I loved the story and the energy and understanding between them. Since you are active, maybe you should consider finishing this story!
I have devoured all of your stories, you have a gift for storytelling. I know you have stated previously you are stuck but I'd love it if you could somehow come back and finish it. Thank you for sharing with us.
I hated to read that you would not be completing this story. It really is good. I hope that inspiration comes to you and you decide to finish it.
This series is by far your best effort and deserves an ending. Please honor your reaters with one.
Writers block I understand . But ,,,,,, Rather than trowing some trash together I sorta understand I will put in the category With Finalstand,Rechiker , Fat_Dad and others I follow . But you have turned to A tale Of revenge in the mean time so I guess I just wait on you .
Thanks for the read
tx cracker
Please, please, PLEASE come back and finish this!! With all the cherries on top 🍒🍒
If you've given up please be magnanimous and offer it to one of the other authors here to finish. I would rather read anything at this point than nothing at all. There is no greater frustration than abandoned stories.
Having read "A Tale of Revenge," I certainly did not expect this story that you wrote prior to that one to be unfinished.
Please come back to finish this wonderful story.
I am so disappointed.
This is a wonderful story and I'm sad that while I've just found it, you've lost your way and haven't returned. This is a really good story. Please finish it
Looking forward to a time when you might be able to sit and write again. Loved this story and wishing you all the best with your essential work.
I don't care if it's been six years, I need to know how the put down the wolves
Love this story!! And I can see why you need an editor. I volunteer! It would be my absolute pleasure to be able to touch the words of a very gifted storyteller.
Well, no one's perfect. At least you are writing and posting stories while there are those of us that just read and enjoy them. Hopefully you'll get an editor to help with your other stories.
Finish this story!!! Please -- years between posts? I understand that you have a life too, You say how much you appreciate the feedback, we would appreciate an ending.