All Comments on 'Knowing Your Strength'

by JimBob44

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

ლ(ಠ益ಠ)ლ why you do this!?

༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ more?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
the Angel angle

Well, I liked it. More questions than answers, though that is not a bad thing. A teaser for a sequel!!!

bearsladybearsladyover 9 years ago

Enjoyed your comments after the story as much as I did your story! I foresee the negative readers being forced to use their tiny amount of creativity to come up with something out of their norm. LOL

jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenover 9 years ago
Huh . . .

Well. Then:

Thank You.

Your Welcome.

A little, but more silly.

Don't think we did any of that this round? xD

Good exercise.

Some of the big stories have towns of them, this was fine.

Need is a strong term.

You too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Welcome back

Welcome back!

eve3514eve3514over 9 years ago
just right, got any more?

i found it easy to read and creative. great ending. can you please rip off another soon. thank you for spell checking and for listening up in english class. i'd pay to read your stuff.

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
concentrate more on the story

less on the cutesy twists.

angels vs angles.

too much effort spent on the unexpected, not enough on the plot.

ariesgirlariesgirlover 9 years ago

I liked the story. I wanted to find out why Angel and Jason are connected.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great story

Welcome back! Looking forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Liked it

No need to put your negative comments on yourself, thought you did a fine job. Made me want to read more. Follow up the story with another few chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I hope this isnt a real story i hate people like that slut gf of that ass hole bullies And the ass hole bully lol

I hope this isnt a real story i hate people like that slut gf of that ass hole bullies And the ass hole bully lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
@Anon from 8-30-14

I literally laughed out loud at your post. Please tell me that you aren't serious about not wanting this to be a real story. I mean, it has a serious supernatural vibe so I kinda doubt that it's legit. Yes, bullying happens and it sucks. That doesn't make it taboo to write about since many have had their lives affected by it.

DrSpideyDrSpideyabout 9 years ago
Three stars.

It wasn't too good, BUT, I liked how unique it was. Even if you need some improvement (don't we all?) I liked how original the idea was.

For that I give you three stars.

loveoverlustloveoverlustabout 9 years ago
PUROGATORY ? SALVATION ? LOL.

Gave a 5 , just for that. Hell , don't we all need an Angel Hart. Thanx.

AdonisXxXAdonisXxXalmost 9 years ago
SMH!

ooowwwwwwwkaaaaaaaaaay *looks away*

snake_territorysnake_territoryabout 8 years ago

I thoroughly enjoyed your story.

FalconsverseFalconsverseover 6 years ago
Great story

I think you did a great job and should do more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Liked

I like it a lot. But left me confused. Wishing there was a bit more.

WiserbyageWiserbyageover 4 years ago
Too Bad

The good ones receive no comments. Five stars.

RageVanesRageVanesover 4 years ago
Can you continue the story

Dude your doing better than what I tried as my 12th grade writing assignment XD (this wasn’t meant to be hurtful or something, I’m seriously impressed keep up the good work)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Too Short! This is the start of a good story. Don't let us down!

Wolfgang1955Wolfgang1955over 2 years ago

Wish it were longer.

MarkT63MarkT63over 2 years ago

Strange story. What was the blood for?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Agree with all the positive comments below...and second the curiosity re Angel's blood in his shorts.

Looking forward to reading the second (and maybe succeeding chapters).

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 1 year ago

Hope the second chapter answers a lot of the questions readers have about this story.

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