by JimBob44
Well, I liked it. More questions than answers, though that is not a bad thing. A teaser for a sequel!!!
Enjoyed your comments after the story as much as I did your story! I foresee the negative readers being forced to use their tiny amount of creativity to come up with something out of their norm. LOL
Well. Then:
Thank You.
Your Welcome.
A little, but more silly.
Don't think we did any of that this round? xD
Good exercise.
Some of the big stories have towns of them, this was fine.
Need is a strong term.
You too.
i found it easy to read and creative. great ending. can you please rip off another soon. thank you for spell checking and for listening up in english class. i'd pay to read your stuff.
less on the cutesy twists.
angels vs angles.
too much effort spent on the unexpected, not enough on the plot.
No need to put your negative comments on yourself, thought you did a fine job. Made me want to read more. Follow up the story with another few chapters.
I hope this isnt a real story i hate people like that slut gf of that ass hole bullies And the ass hole bully lol
I literally laughed out loud at your post. Please tell me that you aren't serious about not wanting this to be a real story. I mean, it has a serious supernatural vibe so I kinda doubt that it's legit. Yes, bullying happens and it sucks. That doesn't make it taboo to write about since many have had their lives affected by it.
It wasn't too good, BUT, I liked how unique it was. Even if you need some improvement (don't we all?) I liked how original the idea was.
For that I give you three stars.
Gave a 5 , just for that. Hell , don't we all need an Angel Hart. Thanx.
I like it a lot. But left me confused. Wishing there was a bit more.
Dude your doing better than what I tried as my 12th grade writing assignment XD (this wasn’t meant to be hurtful or something, I’m seriously impressed keep up the good work)
Agree with all the positive comments below...and second the curiosity re Angel's blood in his shorts.
Looking forward to reading the second (and maybe succeeding chapters).
Hope the second chapter answers a lot of the questions readers have about this story.