All Comments on 'Kitten'

As it is your 1st story hence I wont post any discouraging comment. The thing is that read well to write well. Well tried but need a lot of improvements.

Thank you for your feedback. However, if you cannot provide examples for content/areas that I can improve on then please do not comment at all. It's a little bit confusing, you see. If you didn't enjoy the storyline, that's okay, I posted this fully aware that such content is not approved by all.

Thank you <3

~ Defiantly Submissive ~

Still think you need a new master. Good work Mona ;)

Hello, i really think that it's a good start. Now we need to know what happened to her, and how she fond herself in this situation. Please, go on.

Thank you :)

I intended for this one to just be a short story, but I'll definitely be posting more content in the near future!

Casey no! Thank you though haha <3

*smiles*

Very good first attempt at writing erotica. i would definitely like to see more backstory, but it is a good stand alone short story. Keep writing.

Thank you very much :)

I thought it was a good story. I think adding more back story to tell us how she came to be there. A little more detail in the sexual scenes. Definitely keep writing!

Thank you :) I will definitely keep those tips in mind when I write my next short story!

I really enjoyed it. I hope to read more from you.

Thank you so much!

That last line... Totally makes it.

Nicely done