All Comments on 'Two of a Kind Ch. 01'

Lovely Story, really shows the hard side raising ids alone

Wow, do I love your stories. You always seem to describe emotions so well.

Well done first chapter.

Good beginning (though I think Marcy's name was changed to Jenny at the beginning?). I'd like to get to know the characters more - what are their personalities like? - which is a compliment.

There is a simple answer to the question at the end but it comes with challenges as well. I have my fingers and toes crossed for love and a happy ending for those two. So Tara bring on chapter 2

Remind me that most people call us the weaker sex. Something I know is wrong since all female babies are born more advanced no matter what handicap aflicts during their lifetime. You don't mention it in your story but let everyone know it is so, that we not only nurture we are also the more responsible ones, so loving one and other is simply what nature intended. A moving and great tale I hope their will be plenty more of this possibly new real family.

Love Janice

This is so beautiful, so real. I'm a sixty-year old man with a 23 year-old son who'll never outgrow his hotwheels and Transformers. His sister is 21, going on 9. They both have Autism, and it is so hard!!

I hope that Marcie and the narrator can put together a life.

Please Ms Tara, write more.

This feels so real, please continue your story! Your skills are apparent, your thoughts are vivid, I love the story line...please continue soon!

...a couple of small points, Tara. Firstly 'Jenny' seems to become 'Marcy'. Secondly, 'crocodile tears' are not genuine tears: they are the false tears of a hypocrite or someone intending to deceive. Still, I'm sufficiently interested to go on to Chapter 2.

Ohh. This is exquisite in its embrace of reality. Oh, no, no, no... I need more stars - many more stars.

This is beautiful.

Thank you.