All Comments on 'My Swede (Sweet) Giant Ch. 01'

by DarkBlush

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
AMAZING STORY!!!!

This story is amazing! I haven't read something I liked this much in a long time. But I want to know what happens to crazy Melanie, so keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
*****

Five.

KhamalaniKhamalaniover 9 years ago
Hot

Very HOT!!! 5!!

ariesgirlariesgirlover 9 years ago

Sven is the greatest.

Sven don't need to wait till his crazy ass student does something inappropriate again to turn her in. Coming to his house is stepping further across the line of someone who is not mentally all there. Melanie need to be dealt with. I'm quite sure if Sven was making a nuisance of himself like Melanie she would've reported him already.

Cordelia can go back to school now that she is more stable. She can take some online courses. Sven's place doesn't seem to require a whole lot of housecleaning. Sven isn't the type to leave her like her ex but it wouldn't hurt her to work on her degree.

Were_ChildWere_Childover 9 years ago

Great story! Off to make travel plans....Sweden could be nice this time if year!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
This is a very good story

I'm also thinking of traveling to Sweden! Lol.

Sven must report that girl to the dean. He should not wait for anything else to happen. She came to his house. His. House. She could try to hurt his girl and the baby.

redlion75redlion75over 9 years ago

continue this for another 4-10 chapters.does she go back to school,do they get married, does the crazzy chick get fucked up ,do they have more kids?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Guuuuuurrrrrllllll

What have done to me ? I'm addicted to this story and the other story and you!

I wish I could like other comments.

Please finish. Does that trifling baby daddy come back? Is she having another baby? Does Sven love her and marry her? Does her parents come around? Is school going to happen for her? So many questions ..... Please answer!

Love it!

Kiara

brownskinnedcutiebrownskinnedcutieover 9 years ago
i love this story already!!

Melanie is crazy and needs to be taught a lesson that she will never forget! More please and quickly!!

brownskinnedcutiebrownskinnedcutieover 9 years ago
i have to add

Sven needs to call police, not the Dean. Stalking is crime!!

fantasylover25fantasylover25over 9 years ago
Wow!

Wow, very captivating. Please continue.

swear_toobobswear_toobobover 9 years ago
Laawwwdd!!

Hot damn ..this just became my new fav you are such an amazing writer lol I hope Melanie stops being a creep before she ends up expelled and in jail and the baby daddy stays where he is and lets her have her happiness .... Writing up a storm over there I Love It ! Keep it up

tabbymidnitetabbymidniteover 9 years ago
Loved loved this story

I would love to read more you have a great handle on these characters. Great detail so want to read more .Melanie was a good twist. Think that you can have many chapters and a story as well written to turn on the reader as well. You could never have it b to long of a story...

chocolatesistachocolatesistaover 9 years ago
I really like this!!!!

Sven and Cordelia are great and little Morgan, I love them. Melanie crazy bitch, excuse my language. Wow!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
How lucky can a girl get?

A Swede

A chop

A place to stay

An envious red-headed physco bitch as competition

A vibrator

......geez....and some of us just have to pull pudd while reading this all......hehehe!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
luv it

I love the story so far. I think you're a great writer however I feel ur pace is a little fast and needs a little more detail. Excellent look forward to hearing more

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More of Sven and Cord

Plz make more chaps! Plz plz plz!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Come on! Continue this!

Been checking yo story everyday since. Continue! PLEASE!

BunnyLBunnyLover 9 years ago
!!!!

Just like many others, I'm so (in)patiently waiting for the next chapter!! Very exciting story. Love stories that are about a real woman and a real man, rather than a whore and a poor excuse for a man. Great job, looking forward to the next chapters!!

mich80newmich80newover 9 years ago
Wow, this story is great

Wow Dark Blush, this story is great, can't wait to read the rest in your series!!

avengilineavengilineover 9 years ago
is it just me or do we have similar taste in men!!!

Another excellent story! Oh God find me a man like that plz! Yes and we need more... your adoring fans are suffering from withdrawls lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
oh my...

This is story is so hot!!! I love it!!! 5*****

Cyane64Cyane64over 9 years ago
Amazing!

Amazing! Just what I like to read

colorfullove410colorfullove410over 9 years ago

I am sooo freakin loving this story! Sven remines me of Alexander Skarsgard aka Eric Northman from True Blood! Now that's a hot Swed right there!!! Thanx for this story. 5 Stars!!!!

:-D

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Insanely good.

I don't even know what image to work with. At the mention of Swede, I went with Skarsgard, then Papa Skarsgard instead, them Hemsworth, then Ragnar, and now some kind weird Hemsworth St.Bernard hybrid, which doesn't sound hot but is.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Hot damn

i was mixing Eric Northman (Alexander Skarsgard) from True Blood, Thor of course, and the unforgettable Dolph Ludgreen from Rocky or Jensen from the Expendables. Pic that just too much perfection in one body.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Just started reading , I'm so upset because I started reading ch 6 first . But your stories are amazing . Keep doing what you do

kamillkamillalmost 9 years ago
Love it!

Just my type of interacial love story: sweet and hot bear of a man, and beautiful and loving black woman with a round ass. A definite 5 stars.

ladiebrowneyezladiebrowneyezabout 8 years ago
my goodness

now this is a story

ladiebrowneyezladiebrowneyezabout 8 years ago
..

im so mad i read this story but where is the rest of it!?!?!

SirBigfootSirBigfootabout 8 years ago
re Ladiebrowneyez

just go to his profile page, they are all there.

SirBigfootSirBigfootabout 8 years ago
Sorry

Go to HER profile page and the rest are there.

birdymamabirdymamaover 7 years ago
mmm girl

My new favorite. loved it.

Seventhsun8258Seventhsun8258about 6 years ago
Skarsgard ? to much of a smurf

That dude got looked small next to CM Punk, and he's 6'2 210 not exactly a giant.

Watch the orginal Die Hard (1988) Alexander Gudnov there's Sven

Allegedly_LiterateAllegedly_Literateover 2 years ago

Really? Cordelia walks into his room to get the laundry and he just invites a stranger into his bed because its cold in the house. That's where you loss me but cute. It would've made more sense if she shied away and he later apologized for his behavior.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Love

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