All Comments on 'Dirty Laundry'

This was an okay read, reasonable story and fairly even pacing, but just lacked a little detail in places where it is sorely needed which left it a little limp in the run up to the flirtatious naughtiness. Prime areas were the semi voyeuristic scene and the Burger joint foreplay. Both those scenes could have been far "deeper" in terms of description and padding. Overall I enjoyed it, but it still felt a bit soft in points which took away something from the overall fulfillment of this particular story, if the author went back over it and reworked some areas then it would really become a great ride.

Good to see women taking charge of sexual play.