All Comments on 'Call (T)-Girl: Bible (T)humper'

...As usual, but you missed a big piece of the pie. Eve knew this from almost the first few exchanges, then it disappeared from the story. Once an organized religion would have found out 'she' used to be 'he', everything would have changed, and Cora would no longer have her lovely 'peace' I'm afraid. I have to say the concept was unique, hiring someone like Eve to proselytize to her... wow, Cora took a big chance, and not just with Eve, but with those connected to that 'transaction'... well, I won't go into it, lets just say it shows a real naivety about escort services. But it allowed the story to move on to many other interesting topics. Like what place sex really has in daily life versus being truly celibate. Thanks for sharing YKN, always like following you down these wild rabbit holes you lead us through. Cheers! --- Josie

A well written provocative story.

This story is asking for a sequel. As an enthusiastic fan, I'd like to see the narrator seduced into a life of she-male prostitution as Eve's lover and roommate. It would be fun to see how they would handle the church crowd and perhaps other antagonists popping up in their lives (parents and old friends for example). Keep writing and I'll continue to read - five star erotica!

this was sweet and sexy at the same time I would love to see more of these two.

Sound like the author is expressing deep needs in this story. As a reader I heard those deep needs in myself. After finishing the story, i wish i could be so lucky to run into an Eve of my own. Thanks.

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I've read a few of your stories, and I liked them. You are a good writer with an excellent sense for turning words into pure sex, a rare talent. The only reason I don't read all of your stuff is that we don't quite match in our desires, I generally go for man on tgirl stories which you don't like IIRC, but tgirl^2? That is an intersection of ours I look forward to every time.

Love the story, once again the story is as captivating as it is arousing, love them I can't wait for more.

P.s. I love the steady decent your going at with ur cum fetish scenarios, very hot

I'd love to see more of Cora. Eve, too, but obviously it's your choice as the author as to whether or not Eve remains in Cora's life. I just really want to see where Cora goes from here. (And obviously the sex was hot as fuck)

The story started out positive. However when you got into what the woman Linda and the Pastor had taught her, I could see that she had been taught wrongly. That's why she felt such conflict. I'm glad she didn't chuck what little she did know about God away. I would have preceded to see het win over Eve than a fuck fest. There were a few errors but they didn't take away from the story as a whole.

Wow! Excellent! You have the ability to write a story as if composing a musical piece. You lead the audience on a journey so the end is worth the travel! Thank you.

Great One. Wow, I really don't know how you keep doing it. Thanks so much

Yes, I found a few simple errors and such, but obviously just typos. This story was captivating and touched on some things I've seen addressed before. I am a confirmed fan of your writing now.

Fantastic

Well written, well paced and completely satisfying. Beautiful descriptions of the sex between the two. Erotica at its best.

Great story. I like the characters and the details