by any author! Thank you for writing it for all of us.
Patiently waiting for chapter two.
What's this doing on *Literotica*???
I lost my special one quite a few years ago but it feels like yesterday. I want to say thank you and wish you the best.
A very nice story. The cheating does complicate the character but at the same time humanizes him. I also like seeing a story with older characters.
I have received three more wonderful stories from readers and am putting those into a new chapter now. Will submit to the editors but it does take a week for them to post new stories. Patience will be rewarded. In the mean time, please send me your stories of kindness for future chapters.
thorns have no smell. TK U MLJ LV NV
I'll be waiting for more stories.
Thanks for sharing.
good not great
I never give advice to other authors; their art is their art. But, in this case I have to say that this was very good--but--only as a first chapter of maybe half a dozen. I mean really, guy. But a 5 anyway for the quality of the writing and the emotional impact.
Maybe the author had no thoughts of a multiple part story until he read the comments. I know I made mention of wanting more. What ever he wants to do it's his story!!!!!
So you got this dude suicidal cause his wife left him for a chick cause he wasn't fucking her. You my friend make readers IQ's drop
You really need to label the chapters so that people can figure out what the fuck is going on. I had no idea I was jumping on at chapter two or whether there would be a chapter after this one. I came across the first chapter before this one entirely by accident glancing over your stories for a clue as to what the issue is. Mark your stuff because these shorts don't stand on their own.
That said, Clara is an evil, evil bitch. What the hell? She deliberately took his job away and seduced his wife because he wouldn't cheat on his wife with her? What a cunt.
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