An interestings story, as it is my second reading. A one time gift? I truly believe it. My wife told me stories of her and her sisters sensing or knowing something as their parents passed. There are many other unexplained happenings between people with gifts, sensing happenings or visions of of some kinds? There are many things that can't be quantified or proven but they have happened and been documented. The great pyrimds in Egypt, deep into the pyramids are rooms with artifacts and who knows what but how did they lights those rooms to work on them? There is no signs of soot from burning candles or oil lamps. Electricity? Did have it back then? Who knows. The pictographs of people and the hieroglyphics' showing halos around their heads? Maybe halos were space helmets? Who really knows. Are your a believer, a creationist or is Darwin's theory right? Has all you see in nature evolved from by accident in a mud puddle? Do you believe in the Bible? Just remember the Bible was written by men like you and I. 5 stars
There may not have been any sex but there sure was violence, all well deserved, lol. Loved the story and had to laugh at the body count Miss Kitty kept wracking up. Cracked me up when Miss Kitty ran into Jamal and yelled "Freeze motherfucker!" and had him on the ground. One tough lady for sure. Five stars.
I actually liked it. Probably because of all the misgivings, self-doubts, wrong moves, etc. All that is pretty realistic tome. But the characters were not as well developed as I would like with the result that the story did not have the emotional pull that it could have.
Nope. Sorry. The husband was a total wimp cuck. The wife slotted around with the entire baseball team (yes she did) and then begged to come back. When he moved out, she moved a guy in and didn’t tell the husband even though they talked regularly. Then he comes back, finds her in another relationship, fucking another guy in his bed. He whines and begs to come back. YES! Wimp fucking cuck story. I hate them. 1 star.
10 big blazing stars for writer. Tho my take is that she will do it again the next time a hot guy comes thru her life. I would never trust her. Hubby took too long to heal, He wasted a year of his and her life "healing" LOL leaving everything in turmoil. Oh well. thanks, Buster2U
A couple of problems here. She quit her job to go on the road with Doug then she's meeting hubby in the coffee shop soon after returning while being dressed for work? Hubby's shrink has pronoun issues sometimes it's she/her sometimes it's he/him.
These two won't make it long term. She's got a wandering eye and has bagged two dudes in a year. He's indecisive and a relatively weak character. It's obvious he loves her more and the power in the relationship goes to the person who cares less. I think a look to the future sees her with a piece on the side and him in therapy and a cage.
Not a bad LW story, I liked how the author made note of how Georgia entered the building as opposed to how she left it. Bet the security guard was happy none of whatever hit her landed on him. Hopefully Don had a prenup, but that's for another story. Poor Georgia, just another delusional cheater that got what was coming to them.
Very well written. Full of feeling. I don't like people who get in their own way, even though that is endemic to the human condition. They are soulmates but not together? I don't get it, and that's frustrating. My problem, not yours. If you write a story that's ultimately happy, I'll be fully on board.
5 stars from Xluckylee for a story that almost feels like I was part of it. I grew up 30 miles from Chicago and moved 20 miles south of Fort Worth Texas but that is where the similarities end. Thank you for sharing your stories.
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Still one of my favorite stories, still brings a tear to my eye.
Pets can give us so much love!
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Excellent story, well worth the read⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
An interestings story, as it is my second reading. A one time gift? I truly believe it. My wife told me stories of her and her sisters sensing or knowing something as their parents passed. There are many other unexplained happenings between people with gifts, sensing happenings or visions of of some kinds? There are many things that can't be quantified or proven but they have happened and been documented. The great pyrimds in Egypt, deep into the pyramids are rooms with artifacts and who knows what but how did they lights those rooms to work on them? There is no signs of soot from burning candles or oil lamps. Electricity? Did have it back then? Who knows. The pictographs of people and the hieroglyphics' showing halos around their heads? Maybe halos were space helmets? Who really knows. Are your a believer, a creationist or is Darwin's theory right? Has all you see in nature evolved from by accident in a mud puddle? Do you believe in the Bible? Just remember the Bible was written by men like you and I. 5 stars
There may not have been any sex but there sure was violence, all well deserved, lol. Loved the story and had to laugh at the body count Miss Kitty kept wracking up. Cracked me up when Miss Kitty ran into Jamal and yelled "Freeze motherfucker!" and had him on the ground. One tough lady for sure. Five stars.
I actually liked it. Probably because of all the misgivings, self-doubts, wrong moves, etc. All that is pretty realistic tome. But the characters were not as well developed as I would like with the result that the story did not have the emotional pull that it could have.
Nope. Sorry. The husband was a total wimp cuck. The wife slotted around with the entire baseball team (yes she did) and then begged to come back. When he moved out, she moved a guy in and didn’t tell the husband even though they talked regularly. Then he comes back, finds her in another relationship, fucking another guy in his bed. He whines and begs to come back. YES! Wimp fucking cuck story. I hate them. 1 star.
10 big blazing stars for writer. Tho my take is that she will do it again the next time a hot guy comes thru her life. I would never trust her. Hubby took too long to heal, He wasted a year of his and her life "healing" LOL leaving everything in turmoil. Oh well. thanks, Buster2U
A couple of problems here. She quit her job to go on the road with Doug then she's meeting hubby in the coffee shop soon after returning while being dressed for work? Hubby's shrink has pronoun issues sometimes it's she/her sometimes it's he/him.
These two won't make it long term. She's got a wandering eye and has bagged two dudes in a year. He's indecisive and a relatively weak character. It's obvious he loves her more and the power in the relationship goes to the person who cares less. I think a look to the future sees her with a piece on the side and him in therapy and a cage.
Not a bad LW story, I liked how the author made note of how Georgia entered the building as opposed to how she left it. Bet the security guard was happy none of whatever hit her landed on him. Hopefully Don had a prenup, but that's for another story. Poor Georgia, just another delusional cheater that got what was coming to them.
Very well written. Full of feeling. I don't like people who get in their own way, even though that is endemic to the human condition. They are soulmates but not together? I don't get it, and that's frustrating. My problem, not yours. If you write a story that's ultimately happy, I'll be fully on board.
I enjoyed the story. I would never be able to get past the betrayal.
5 stars from Xluckylee for a story that almost feels like I was part of it. I grew up 30 miles from Chicago and moved 20 miles south of Fort Worth Texas but that is where the similarities end. Thank you for sharing your stories.
I just don't understand why he doesn't divorce her and take the money from the house? Get his own place. Spend his money on the things he likes?
Steve is a sucker. They are together until the next shiny thing comes along. Carl is the lucky one. He dodged a bullet.